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Do you think parents should allow their teenage children to have their own credit cards? *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I disagree with the opinion that parents should allow their teenage children card, because that seems to have many demerits.

Firstly, children are too irresponsible to care about money properly.People are gradually have their responsibility, as they grow from a child to an adult.So they can use money until its sum become considerably.

Secondly, an adult who find a child using credit card is able to steal it easily.In fact, the incidents which relate to the credit card already has been happend.

In conclusion, it is seems to have a lot of danger that parents give a credit card for their children.

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Do you think parents should allow their teenage children to have their own credit cards?

*I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I disagree with the opinion that parents/I don't think parents should allow their teenage children own a credit card, because that seems to have many disadvantages.

Firstly, children are too irresponsible to care about money properly.People gradually increase their responsibility(, as they grow from a child to an adult/as they grow up).So they can use money until its sum become considerably.what... XD

Secondly, an adult who finds a child using a credit card is able to steal it easily.In fact, there have been many incidents like this due to a child having a credit card.

In conclusion, it is seems that it can be dangerous for parents to give a credit card to their children.

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