Hi! Can somebody help me with my very brief assignement?
Hi, I'm attending a course in academic writing and my assignement for the next week is to rewrite an informal text in an appropriate academic style. Is this good enough? Should I correct/rewrite something?
In the 1930s, American linguist Benjamin Lee Whorf claimed that language might affect the way
we think. For instance, Eskimos, who are known for their several versions of the term “snow”,
may find our way to illustrate it reductive. Although many did not agree with Worf’s ideas, they
were not forgotten. Nowadays a group of cognitive psychologists have resumed the search for the
effects of language on the mind, with some interesting results.
Researchers first investigated Whorfian effects in the 1950s, analysing colour vocabularies. Some
languages divide the spectrum solely into two categories of light and dark, but others make finer
distinctions even if they are not exactly the same. Researchers wondered whether these linguistic
patterns could indicate that the speakers of separate languages perceive colour in different manners.
Apparently that was no such case. By the 1970s, psychologists came to the conclusion that
linguistic and perceptual distinctions were not related to one another.
Thank you in advance!
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Hi! Can somebody help me with my very brief assignement?
Hi, I'm attending a course in academic writing and my assignement for the next week is to rewrite an informal text in an appropriate academic style. Is this good enough? Should I correct/rewrite something?In the 1930s, American linguist Benjamin Lee Whorf claimed that language might affect the way
we think. For instance, Eskimos, who are known for their several versions of the term “snow”,
may find our way to illustrate it reductive. Although many did not agree with Worf’s ideas, they
were not forgotten. Nowadays a group of cognitive psychologists have resumed the search for the
effects of language on the mind, with some interesting results.
Researchers first investigated Whorfian effects in the 1950s, analysing colour vocabularies. Some
languages divide the spectrum solely into two categories of light and dark, but others make finer
distinctions even if they are not exactly the same. Researchers wondered whether these linguistic
patterns could indicate that the speakers of separate languages perceive colour in different manners.
Apparently that was no such case. By the 1970s, psychologists came to the conclusion that
linguistic and perceptual distinctions were not related to one another.
Thank you in advance!
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Without the original text I must assume that you rewrote this piece in which case well done.
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Hey, Give your email address. I will highlight your mistakes and give some suggestion as well. I will try to complete it by the end of today.
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