thanks for the present! Hi Enma! thank you very much for the present!! In my opinion, it´s a good idea that you send me the money for buy CD. I know that I´m special in my elections. I went to the

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thanks for the present! Hi Enma! thank you very much for the present!! In my opinion, it´s a good idea that you send me the money for buy CD. I know that I´m special in my elections. I went to the music shop and i saw any CD´s. There were a lot of interesting CD´s. Finally, i bought the best! Queen recopilation music, with the most interesting songs. That is one of my favourites groupes of music. The group is a mitical and they has the best songs in the world for me. Therefore, I decided buy a rememoration of them. I´m going to listen now. it´s a good present. When I will listen the CD, I always remember you. Thank you again, i hope that you are good!! Best whishes! Your friend!

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Hi Carmen, how are you?

I've just corrected your text. My comments and explanations are between brackets and in light blue (like this) so it's easier to understand. I've noticed that you type the apostrophe for contractions using the tilde key ´ , but the correct one is the one of the final question mark ' .

By the way, I'm a big Queen fan, too!

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thanks for the present!

Hi Enma! Thanks for the present! (this should go after you say hi)

Thank you very much for the present!! (you don't need to repeat "for the present") In my opinion, it's a good idea that you sent (past form) me the money for buying (for + ing, OR to + infinitive) a CD. I know that I'm special in my elections choices.

I went to the music shop and I (the first person singular, I, is always in capital letter) saw any some CD´s CDs (the plural form of CD is CDs). There were a lot of interesting CDs. Finally, I bought the best! A Queen compilation music, with the most interesting songs. That is one of my favourites groupes of music groups.

The group is a mythical and they have the best songs in the world for me. Therefore So ("Therefore" is too formal for a letter to a friend) I decided to buy a compilation of them. I'm going to listen to it now. It's a good great/nice/wonderful (stronger adjective than "good") present. When I will listen to the CD, I will always remember you. (First Conditional)

Thank you again, I hope that you are good!!

Best wishes!

Your friend,

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Take care and keep on learning!

Thanks for the present!

Hi Enma!

Thank you very much for the present!! In my opinion, it´s a good idea that you sent me the money to for buy the CD. I know that I´m particular with my music special in my elections.

I went to the music shop and I saw many CD´s. There were a lot of interesting CD´s. Finally, I bought the best! Queen recompilation music, with the most interesting songs. That is one of my favourites music groups of all times.

The group is a mythical and they have the best songs in the world for me. Therefore, I decided buy a rememoration??? of them. I´m going to listen now. it´s a good present. When I will listen to the CD, I always think remember you.

Thank you again, i hope that you are good!!

Best whishes!

Your friend!

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