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IT Management Log entry #1 Well, in the last Christmas I quit my old job in a company that I was a partner for 8 years. It's very complicated to me explain how I took that decision but, fortunately, I took note of all my activities as an IT manager and written them down in some kind of diary. I'll try to reproduce some of those activities here just to practice my English, so I appreciate any feedback you guys could give to me. So, this is the 1st notes: In the first weeks of 2017, we had 2 project pre-sales that involve the commercial and the IT teams. The first one was about to build an LMS (Learning Management System) for a university. After some meetings, we sent our technical questions about the system features and after receiving the answers I set the team up and estimate the costs. The second proposal was a short project to upgrade and test an App to run on the last version of Android Nougat 7.0. I divided this proposal into two stages. The first stage involves just test the current App on the new platform 7.0. The second stage, which could not necessarily be done, was to fixed any issues we found in our tests. Unfortunately, we didn't sell the first project. But we sold the second one, so in next entries, it will probably appear again as we started to work on it.

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IT Management Log entry #1

Well, in the last Christmas I quit my old job in a company that I was had been a partner for 8 years.
It's very complicated to for me to explain how I took that decision but, fortunately, I took note of all my activities as an IT manager and have written them down (them written down) in some kind of diary (a bit of a makeshift diary).
I'll try to reproduce some of those activities here just to practice my English, so I (and would) appreciate any feedback you guys could give (to) me.

So, this is the these are my 1st notes:
In the first weeks of 2017, we had 2 project pre-sales projects that involved the commercial and the IT teams.
The first one was about to building an LMS (a Learning Management System) for a university. After some (a few/several) meetings, we sent our technical questions about the system features, and after receiving the answers, I set up the team up and estimated the costs (required).

The second proposal was a short project, to (which/that involved) upgrading and testing an App to run on the last version of Android Nougat 7.0. I divided this proposal into two stages. The first stage involved just (simply) testing the current App on the new platform 7.0. The second stage, which could not necessarily be done (required completion of phase/stage 1), was to fixed any issues we found in (during) our tests.

Unfortunately, we didn't sell the first project.

But we sold (did sell) the second one, so in my next (following) entries, it will probably appear again as we had started to work on it.

- Well-written!

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