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Do you think newspaper company should stop printing on paper and use only the Internet? *I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me where I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I disagree with the opinion that newspaper companies should stop printing, because our interest toward current news seems to be gradually decreasing.

Of course, printing newspaper need much costs. So someone may think netnews is enough to know current things. Netnews is so convenient that you can read news even when you are on the train.

However, I think because you tend to read topics which you interested in, you through another topics. When you read paper one, you can see another topics without your intention, and know about it.

In conclusion, I want people to interested in current news, otherwise campaigns which are aimed to solve social problems will decline in future.

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Do you think newspaper company should stop prints (print (noun): a newspaper) and publish news only on the Internet?

*I practiced writing a short essay in English. Please correct me if  I am wrong and tell me why it is wrong.

I disagree with the opinion that newspaper companies should stop printing, because our interest toward current news seems to be gradually decreasing

Of course, printing newspaper need higher costs. Furthermore, someone may think online news is enough to know current events. Online news is so convenient because you can read news even when you are on the train.

However, I think because you tend to read topics which you are interested in, you would skip through other topics. When you read the newspaper one, you will inadvertently (inadvertently: without intention) read other topics, and know about them.

In conclusion, I want people to be interested in current news. Otherwise,  campaigns which are aiming to solve social problems will decline in the future.

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