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My dream home- a beach villa I’m going to talk about my dream home. To be honest, I have pictured my dream home since I was a child.As I spent most of my holidays on the beach, I truly love water sports and activities so I would like my house located in a city with a beautiful beach. Precisely, It must be situated on the beach side. So that I can just open the door and walk to the beach. But the location should not be far from the downtown, I still want the convenience of living in a city. My dream beach villa is a large, two stories building. At least 4 bedrooms and a lot of windows so I can see amazing sea view from every room. About the interior design, I prefer modern style decoration. Just simple but useful(?) with some technological equipment. Besides I love cooking so I would like to have an big open-kitchen with an island and a big dinner table and a bar where I can treat my friends. Moreover, there must have a large patio where I can hold a BBQ party at home or just lie on the chair reading books. Anyway, Once I can afford this kind of house I want to move in immediately. I would like to spend the rest of my live there. I believe that living in this kind house can make me feel relaxing and ease my pressure from work.

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My dream home- a beach villa

I’m going to talk about my dream home. To be honest, I have pictured my dream home since I was a child. Since I spent most of my holidays on the beach, I truly love water sports and activities. Therefore, I would like my house to be located in a city with a beautiful beach.

Precisely speaking, it must be situated on near the beach side so that I can just open the door and walk to the beach. But the location should not be far from the downtown, as I still want the convenience of living in a city.

My dream beach villa is a large, two-story building with at least 4 bedrooms and a lot of windows so I can have an amazing sea view from every room. AboutFor the interior design, I prefer modern-style decorations that are Just simple but useful(?), with some technological equipment. In addition, I love cooking so I would like to have an big, open kitchen with an island, and a big dinner table and a bar where I can treat my friends. Moreover, there must have be a large patio where I can hold a BBQ party at home or just lie on a chair reading books.

Anyway, Once I can afford this kind of house, I want to move in immediately. I would like to spend the rest of my live life there. I believe that living in this kind of house can will make me feel relaxed and ease my pressure from work.
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My dream home- a beach villa

I’m going to talk about my dream home. To be honest, I have pictured my dream home since I was a child. Since I spend most of my holidays on the beach, I truly love water sports and activities so I would like my house to be located in a city with a beautiful beach.

Precisely, It must be situated on the beach side. So that/That way I can just open the door and walk to the beach. But the location should not be far from the downtown because I still want the convenience of living in a city.

My dream beach villa is a large, two story building with at least 4/four bedrooms and a lot of windows so I can see the amazing sea view from every room. As for the /About the interior design, I prefer modern style decoration/ I prefer a modern style. Just simple but equipped with some technological equipment. Besides, I love cooking so I would like to have an big open-kitchen with an island (an island?! O.o), a big dinner table and a bar where I can treat my friends. Moreover, there must be a large patio where I can hold a BBQ (party) at home or just lie on a chair reading books.

Anyway, once I can afford this kind of house, I want to move in immediately. I would like to spend the rest of my life there. I believe that living in this kind of house can make me feel relaxed and ease my pressure from work.


Great writing! :D

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A wonderful dream. I think if you effort, your dream will be come true. Everyone has the right to dream, It's a motivation to try. Good luck!

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