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Day 35: The second day of Astronomy In the second version of the Astronomy day, We will talk about the moon because at January and February had some amazing events . The moon always had been a referent on the sky and had manages to awaken our imagination, how the man traveled to the moon it´s an excellent story for another day and maybe it´s will be an introduction for this topic.

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Day 35: The second day of Astronomy

In the second version of the Astronomy Day, we will talk about the Moon* because January and February had some amazing events .

The Moon has always been a reference in the heavens and manages to wake** our imagination. How man traveled to the moon is an excellent story for another day but maybe it´s worth an introduction here.

*Moon, Sun, Earth,... are old English that modern English writes as moon, sun, earth, ... As far as I know, the old coinage is still good.

**your version is also perfectly good.

Very well written!

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