[ 157 A lunch with a Tuk-tuk driver. ]
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When it was the noon, my Tuk-tuk driver asked me for a lunch. He proposed a modern or local restaurant. I trusted him and chose a local one.
He took me a nice atmosphere dining restaurant. It seemed that he’s been familiar with this restaurant because a waitress was smiling. Also it’s been a family run business.
I went to a restroom, before I had a lunch.
A girl who looked like a daughter of the family took me to the restroom of her home. I saw some Cambodian interior inside the home. It was interesting and I imagined about family’s life.
I had a plate of fried rice for $3 USD and he had a plate of rice with some fish for ¥2 USD. The dishes were great and we talked about our plans and nice heritage sites.
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When it was the noon, my tuk-tuk driver asked invited me for a to lunch. He proposed a modern or local restaurant. I trusted him and chose a local one.
He took me to a restaurant with a nice atmosphere dining restaurant. It seemed that he’s been familiar with this restaurant because a waitress was smiling. Also, it’s been a family-run business. (Using the word "been" in this sentence begs for elaboration. For example: "Also, it's been a family-run business for 15 years". Otherwise, use: "Also, it's a family-run business".)
I went to a the restroom, before I had a lunch.
A girl who looked like a daughter of the family took me to the restroom of in her home. I saw some Cambodian interior decorations inside the home. It was interesting and I imagined about what the family’s life is like.
I had a plate of fried rice for $3 USD, and he had a plate of rice with some fish for ¥$2 USD. The dishes were great and we talked about our plans and nice heritage sites.
He took me to a restaurant with a nice atmosphere dining restaurant. It seemed that he’s been familiar with this restaurant because a waitress was smiling. Also, it’s been a family-run business. (Using the word "been" in this sentence begs for elaboration. For example: "Also, it's been a family-run business for 15 years". Otherwise, use: "Also, it's a family-run business".)
I went to a the restroom, before I had a lunch.
A girl who looked like a daughter of the family took me to the restroom of in her home. I saw some Cambodian interior decorations inside the home. It was interesting and I imagined about what the family’s life is like.
I had a plate of fried rice for $3 USD, and he had a plate of rice with some fish for ¥$2 USD. The dishes were great and we talked about our plans and nice heritage sites.
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