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Many things have bothered me
People said tomorrow is a fresh and totally new day ,but to me ,it is not .So many things have bothered me these days .Getting up at 7:30 then go to work at 8:00 and sit in front of a computer with nothing to do till 17:00.Then go back my home and have meal .Then i continue to play computer after that i go to bed .It has happened about last 2 months ,i found my life is so boring , no passion ,no changing but regulations .i want to make my body stronger i want to be fatter i want to improve my english and i want to be a successful man . i want to be a boss in my future ,but if things are kept like now ,it is impossible, and never will be. i think i have to change my lifestyle ,but how? i don't know .God damn it ,i am always get bothered by these fucking things and i even cant sleep well these days maybe i will be sick some day . God ,what should i do ,my friends?
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-Capital the pronoun "I".
Many things are bothered bothering me.
People said tommorrow is will be a fresh and totally new day, but to me, it is not. So many thing bothered are bothering me these days. Getting up on at 7:30, then going to work on at 8:00, and siting in front of a computer but with nothing to do till 17:00. Then I go back my home and have a meal. Then i continiue to play on the computer and after that i go to bed .it This has been happening happened for about 2 months, and i find that my life is so broing. There is no passion, no changing, but regulations. I want to make my body stronger, I want to be fatter, I want to improve my English, and I want to be a successful man. I want to be a boss in my the future, but if things are kept like now this,it is will be impossible,never. I think i have to change my lifestyle, but how, I don't know how. God damn it, I am always bothered by these fucking things and I even can't even sleep well these days. maybe I will be get sick some one day . God, what should I do, my friends?
Aw why? You should try to reach your goals. You only have one life, so make it count. I hope you reach your goals. ^_^
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