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many things bothered me people said tommorrow is a fresh and totally new day ,but to me ,it is not .So many thing bothered me these days .Getting up on 7.30 then go to work on 8.00 and sit in front of a computer but nothing to do till 17.00.then go back my home and have meal .then i continiue to play computer after that i go to bed .it has happened about 2months ,i find my life is so broing , no passion ,no changing but regulations .i want to make my body stronger i want to be fatter i want to improve my english i want to be a successful man . i want to be a boss in my future ,but if things are kept like now ,it is impossible,never . i think i have to change my lifestyle ,but how ,i dont know .god damn it ,i am always bothered by these fucking things and i even cant sleep well these days maybe i will be sick some day . god ,what should i do ,my friends

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Many things have bothered me

People said tomorrow is a fresh and totally new day ,but to me ,it is not .So many things have bothered me these days .Getting up at 7:30 then go to work at 8:00 and sit in front of a computer with nothing to do till 17:00.Then go back my home and have meal .Then i continue to play computer after that i go to bed .It has happened about last 2 months ,i found my life is so boring , no passion ,no changing but regulations .i want to make my body stronger i want to be fatter i want to improve my english and i want to be a successful man . i want to be a boss in my future ,but if things are kept like now ,it is impossible, and never will be. i think i have to change my lifestyle ,but how? i don't know .God damn it ,i am always get bothered by these fucking things and i even cant sleep well these days maybe i will be sick some day . God ,what should i do ,my friends?

 

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Many things are bothered bothering me.

People said tommorrow is will be a fresh and totally new day, but to me, it is not.  So many thing bothered are bothering me these days.  Getting up on at 7:30, then going to work on at 8:00, and siting in front of a computer but with nothing to do till 17:00.  Then I go back my home and have a meal.  Then i continiue to play on the computer and after that i go to bed .it This has been happening happened for about 2 months, and i find that my life is so broing. There is no passion, no changing, but regulations.  I want to make my body stronger, I want to be fatter, I want to improve my English, and I want to be a successful man.  I want to be a boss in my the future, but if things are kept like now this,it is will be impossible,never. I think i have to change my lifestyle, but how, I don't know how.  God damn it, I am always bothered by these fucking things and I even can't even sleep well these days. maybe I will be get sick some one day . God, what should I do, my friends?

Aw why?  You should try to reach your goals.  You only have one life, so make it count.  I hope you reach your goals. ^_^ 

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