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Which is better: living in the country or big city life?
Which is better: living in the country or big city life? Some people claim that living in the city is more comfortable than country life. Others argue that life in the country is more rewarding. Let us examine some of the reasons for such difference in attitude.
I believe it is more beneficial to live in the city. To begin with, a city man has more opportunities to better scholarship and more high-paying jobs. Furthermore, the city offers a wide range of entertainments. The countryside cannot contest with the city when it comes to museums, theatres, shopping centers.
However, some people prefer living in the countryside because they see certain advantages. Firstly, the atmosphere in the countryside is more relaxed, quiescent, there is no hustle and bustle. Secondly, country people are more friendly and responsive. People work together and look out for one another, creating a greater sense of community.
I cannot agree with the statement given above. First of all, there is nothing wrong with loud noise and busy streets. It is comforting, natural. Many people cannot stand silence and would find country life boring.
As for friendliness of country dwellers, one can have lots of friends in the city and enemies in the country, it is a matter of personality.
To sum up, there are no telling arguments to convince me of benefits of living in the country. Still I am sure city life is far more advantageous.
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Could you please check the essay?
Which is better: living in the country or big city life?Which is better: living in the country or big city life? Some people claim that living in the city is more comfortable than country life. Others argue that life in the country is more rewarding. Let us examine some of the reasons for such contrasting attitudes.
I believe that overall it is more beneficial to live in the city. To begin with, a city man or woman has more opportunities to better education and more high-paying jobs. Furthermore, the city offers a wide range of entertainments. The countryside cannot compete with the city when it comes to museums, theatres, shopping centers and other such facilities.
However, some people prefer living in the countryside because they see certain advantages. Firstly, the atmosphere in the countryside is more relaxed and tranquil; there is no hustle and bustle. Secondly, country people are more friendly and responsive. People work together and look out for one another, creating a greater sense of community.
I cannot agree with the previous statements. In my view, there is nothing wrong with loud noise and busy streets. It is comforting and natural. Many people cannot stand silence and would find country life boring. As for the friendliness of country dwellers, one can have lots of friends in the city and enemies in the country - it is a matter of personality.
To sum up, there are no telling arguments to convince me of the benefits of living in the country. I remain certain that city life is far more advantageous.
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Could you please check the eesay?
Which is better: living in the country or big city life?Which is better: living in the country or big city life? Some say that city life is more comfortable than country life. Others argue that life in the country is more rewarding. Let us examine some of the reasons for this difference in opinion.
I believe it is more beneficial to live in the city. To begin with, a city man has more opportunities to better scholarship and more high-paying jobs. Furthermore, the city offers a wide range of entertainment. The countryside cannot contest with the city when it comes to museums, theatres, shopping centers.
However, some people prefer living in the countryside because they see certain advantages. Firstly, the atmosphere in the countryside is more relaxed, quiescent, there is no hustle and bustle. Secondly, country folk are more friendly and responsive. They work together and look out for one another, creating a greater sense of community.
I cannot agree with the paragraph above. First of all, there is nothing wrong with loud noise and busy streets. It is comforting, natural. Many people cannot stand silence and find country life boring. As for the friendliness of country dwellers, one can have lots of friends in the city and enemies in the country; it is a matter of personality.
To sum up, there are no telling arguments to convince me of the benefits of country life. I still am sure city life is far more advantageous.
Very well written!
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I saw nothing worth correcting that has not already been done.
I do believe you made my point in your writing as your preference is in city life with the museums, theaters, and 'there is nothing wrong with loud noise and busy streets. It is comforting, natural. Many people cannot stand silence and would find country life boring.'
Just as with the happiness concept, our ideal home is individually decided by ourselves and after all if we all wanted the same thing then the country might be busier than the city as everyone mass migrated from the city to the countryside. Good writing and easy to understand.
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Well, I believe there is no general rule to decide which is better, to live in the countryside or in a big city. It depends on each person. I love the countryside, but just for holidays or weekends. In everyday life, I really enjoy having always a good hospital, a fast internet connection and a bunch of pizzerias nearby.
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