Review of K-pop and memory etc:

I like to listening to American pop music, but i was surprised by the AMA.

Just three months ago, I was a solider in the Korean army.  We only had interest in girl groups, but we saw a show with dancing and singing by BTS.

Honestly, we still weren't interested in the group because the group has all boys!

Even so, we were charmed by their dancing and other attractive things, so we stayed until the end of the show(?).

And... After I was discharged by the Korean army, I saw another of their shows where BTS performed in the AMA.

Then I could see many reviews of the show.

I was shocked because BTS took a photo with Marshmallow and Camela, who sang the Havana.

And then, I saw the video which was broadcast by the Pew-di-pie.

I think he is really crazy. But anyway, he is a very funny guy, hahaha.

The obvious thing is, in such a world, I must study English harder.

That is my motivation.

February eighth, twenty-eighteen.

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Review of K-pop and memory etc..

And I like to listening to American's pop music.

But I was surprised by the AMA

Just three month ago, I was solider in the Korean army, and we just had interest in girl group, but we saw a show that BTS danced and sang.

Honestly, we aren't interested in the group, because the group has all boys!

By the way, we are charmed, their dance and attrative things, so we had seen by last scene. 

And... After I was discharged by the Korean army, I saw their show where was performed by BTS at the AMA.

And then I can see many reviews of the show.

I was shocked, because BTS took the photo with Marshmellow and Camela who sang the Havana.

And then, I can see the video which was broadcasted by the Pew-die-pie.

I think, he is really crazy. But anyway he is very funny guy. Hahaha.

The obvious things is, in such a world, I must study English harder.

That is motivation.

February. eighth. twenty-eighteen