Correct me please
Imagine that you and your friends are members of a new music fan club. Plan and write
an Internet page (35–45 words) describing your club. Include this information:
• why and when the club started;
• number of members joining the club weekly / monthly;
• who can join the club
Hello friends. Are you looking for a steep music fan club? Congratulations you found it. Our club was created for people, who love music, it was started a year ago. Since then, hundreds of people have begun joining us. Anyone who wants can join us. Waiting for you!
(48 words)
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Hello, I don't know what a steep music fan club is, but please see below for a suggestion.
Hi!. Are you looking for a steep music fan club? Congratulations! Your search is over! Our club was created a year ago, for people who love music. Since then, our membership has grown into the hundreds. Anyone can join; all we ask is that you are passionate about music. So what are you waiting for?(48 words)
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Very good, except as mentioned in other comment no idea what steep music is?
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Correct me please
Imagine that you and your friends are members of a new music fan club. Plan and writean Internet page (35–45 words) describing your club. Include this information:
• why and when the club started;
• number of members joining the club weekly / monthly;
• who can join the club
Hello friends. Are you looking for a music fan club? Congratulations you have found it. Our club was created for people, who love music, it was started a year ago. Since then, hundreds of people have began joining us. Anyone who wants can join us. We are waiting for you!
(48 words)
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