IELTS (Leisure time)
In my opinion, professional athletes are good role models for young people. However, that could only be the case if the athletes do not make any unconscious actions, such as arrogant behavior, intolerate speeches and much more. In any other cases athletes may teach their followers and fans how to reach the goals, how to act no matter what others say and how to demonstrate the best they have.
As for me, I always keep in mind famous runners when doing evening running sessions. Although I do not know anyone in particular, I still feel the motivation and inflow of forces once I imagine how hard professionals prepare themselves for the races. It helps me beat my own results and move forward in sport.
I also know one girl whose performance relates to the performance of her favourite tennis player. Sometimes when she is watching the championship, I believe she is able to anticipate many of her role model's maneuvers.
It is also should be mentioned that the youngsters tend to follow the famous stars regardless of the industry they work in. However, sport professionals could teach their fans much more than any other show-business representative. I therefore highly recommend every child to follow someone from the big sport industry and to train him/herself accordingly.
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IELTS (Leisure time)
In my opinion, professional athletes are good role models for young people. However, that can only be the case if the athletes are not guilty of any thoughtless acts do not make any unconscious actions, such as arrogant behaviour, intolerant speeches or similar actions and much more. In any other case, athletes may teach their followers and fans how to reach their goals, how to act no matter what others say and how to demonstrate the best they have.As for me, I always keep in mind famous runners when doing evening running sessions. Although I do not know anyone in particular, I still feel the motivation and inflow of forces once I imagine how hard professionals prepare themselves for the races. It helps me beat my own records results and move forward in the sport.
I also know one girl whose performance relates to the performance of her favourite tennis player. Sometimes when she is watching the championship, I believe she is able to anticipate many of her role model's manoeuvres.
It is also should also be mentioned that the youngsters tend to follow the famous stars regardless of the industry they work in. However, sport professionals could teach their fans much more than any other show-business representative. I, therefore, highly recommend every child to follow someone from the big a major sport industry and to train him/herself accordingly.
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IELTS (Leisure time)
In my opinion, professional athletes are good role models for young people. However, that could only be the case if the athletes do not make any unconscious actions, such as arrogant behavior, intolerant speeches and much more. In any other cases, athletes may teach their followers and fans how to reach their goals, how to act no matter what others say and how to demonstrate the best they have.As for me, I always keep in mind famous runners when doing evening running sessions. Although I do not know anyone, in particular, I still feel the motivation and inflow of forces once I imagine how hard professionals prepare themselves for the races. It helps me beat my own results and move forward in the sport.
I also know about one girl whose performance is similar to the performance of her favourite tennis player. Sometimes, when she watches the championship, I believe she is able to anticipate many of her role model's maneuvers.
It should also be mentioned that the youngsters tend to follow the famous stars regardless of the industry in which they work. However, sport professionals could teach their fans much more than any other show-business representative. I therefore highly recommend every child to follow someone from the big sports industry and to train him/herself accordingly.
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IELTS (Leisure time)
In my opinion, professional athletes are good role models for young people. However, that (could only be) is the case only if the athletes do not make any unconscious actions, such as arrogant behavior, intolerante speeches and much more many others. In any (all) other cases athletes may teach their followers and fans how to reach their goals, how to act no matter what others say and how to demonstrate the best they have.As for me, I always keep in mind famous runners when doing evening running sessions. Although I do not know anyone in particular, I still feel the motivation and inflow of forces (energy) once I imagine how hard professionals prepare themselves for the races. It helps me beat my own results and move forward in sport.
I also know one girl whose performance relates to the performance of her favourite tennis player. Sometimes when she is watching the championship, I believe she is able to anticipate many of her role model's maneuvers (moves).
It is also should be mentioned that the youngsters tend to follow the famous stars regardless of the industry they work in. However, sport professionals could teach their fans much more than any other show-business representative. I therefore highly recommend every child to follow someone from the big sport industry and to train him/herself accordingly.
Very well written Alice! I've put a few words in ( ) that mean the same, but sound more natural. If you have any questions about any of the other corrections, please let me know.
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IELTS (Leisure time)
In my opinion, professional athletes are good role models for young people. However, that could only be the case if the athletes do not make any unconscious actions, such as arrogant behavior, intolerant speeches and much more. In any other case athletes may teach their followers and fans how to reach their goals, how to act no matter what others say and how to demonstrate the best they have.As for me, I always keep in mind famous runners when doing evening running sessions. Although I do not know anyone (any of them) in particular, I still feel the motivation and inflow of forces (not sure what you mean here - flow of strength maybe?) once I imagine how hard professionals prepare themselves for the races. It helps me beat my own results and move forward (ok but improve is good also) in sport.
I also know one girl whose performance relates to the performance of her favourite tennis player. Sometimes when she is watching the championship, I believe she is able to anticipate many of her role model's maneuvers.
It is also should be mentioned that the youngsters tend to follow the famous stars regardless of the industry they work in. However, sport professionals could teach their fans much more than any other show-business representative. I therefore highly recommend every child to follow someone from the big sport industry and to train him/herself accordingly.
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