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Things that make me happy In my last notebook I decided to begin a musical challenge, I wrote the first day and after that I couldn't continue, I was reading the list and I just couldn't get inspiration. For this reason, I decided to start another challenge: "30 days of writting"; my first day is "list 10 things that really make you happy" 1. Having a beautiful family: I have the fortune of having a great mom, a wonderful cousin and beautiful grandparents. They have been with me since I was a child and I'm sure they are going to be with me always. 2. Having a lovely boyfriend: Our story began a lot of years ago. We met in a party and we dated for a year, but it didn't work. Seven years later we began dating again and currently we are a lovely couple, we have dreams and plans for get real. 3. My job: As a consultant, being in touch with a client and help the people with solving their problems is a great feeling. 4. Passion fruit Ice cream: There is anything in the whole world that can't be solved with a delicious Passion fruit ice cream. 5. Travelling: There's a lot of places waiting for being discovered and a lot of beautiful skylines to know. Having a lot of memories from the places I visit definitely makes me happy. 6. Eating: I love try new tastes, althought it doesn't work all the times. 7.Sleeping after a long day: As everyone, sometimes I don't have good days, and I can't wait for coming my home and sleep in my bed. 8. Walking sorrounded by the nature: When I need perspective, thinking about an important decision or I just want to feel relaxed, there are no better activity than go to the park or the "Jardin Botánico" in my city for get a walk. 9. A warm shower: It is my preferred activity in the morning. 10. Learning: Off course learning is into the list: learning about myself, learning a language, learning a new statistical model or just learning to take a photo. I love the feeling of doing something with my mind. Thanks in advance for correcting my writing!

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Things that make me happy

In my last notebook I decided to begin a musical challenge, I wrote the first day and after that I couldn't continue, I was reading the list and I just couldn't get inspiration. For this reason, I decided to start another challenge: "30 days of writting"; my first day is "list 10 things that really make you happy"

1. Having a beautiful family: I have the fortune of having a great mom, a wonderful cousin and beautiful grandparents. They have been with me since I was a child and I'm sure they are going to be with me always.
2. Having a lovely boyfriend: Our story began a lot of many years ago. We met in at a party and we dated for a year, but it didn't work. Seven years later we began dating again and currently we are a lovely couple, we have dreams and plans for get real. (the future?)
3. My job: As a consultant, being in touch with a client and helping the people with solve ng their problems is a great feeling.
4. Passion fruit Ice cream: There is anything nothing n the whole world that can't be solved with a delicious Passion fruit ice cream.
5. Travelling: There's a lot of places waiting for to  being discovered and a lot of beautiful skylines to know. Having a lot of memories from the places I visit definitely makes me happy.
6. Eating: I love trying new tastes, althought it doesn't work all the times.
7.Sleeping after a long day: As Like everyone, sometimes I don't have good days, and I can't wait for to comeing my home and sleep in my bed.
8. Walking sourrounded by the nature: When I need perspective, when I'm thinking about an important decision or I just want to feel relaxed, there are is no better activity than to go to the park or the "Jardin Botánico" in my city for get a walk.
9. A warm shower: It is my preferred activity in the morning.
10. Learning: Off course learning is into on the list: learning about myself, learning a language, learning a new statistical model or just learning to take a photo. I love the feeling of doing something with my mind.

Thanks in advance for correcting my writing!    This is really good! Well done!







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Things that make me happy

In my last notebook entry, I decided to begin a musical challenge, I wrote on the first day and after that I couldn't continue, I was reading the list and I just couldn't get inspiration. For this reason, I decided to start another challenge: "30 days of writing"; my first day is "list 10 things that really make you happy"

1. Having a beautiful family: I have the fortune of having a great mom, a wonderful cousin and beautiful grandparents. They have been with me since I was a child and I'm sure that they are going to be with me always.
2. Having a lovely boyfriend: Our story began a lot of years ago. We met at a party and we dated for a year, but it didn't work. Seven years later, we began dating again and currently we are a lovely couple, we have dreams and plans for the future.
3. My job: As a consultant, being in touch with a client and helping them with solving their problems is a great feeling.
4. Passion fruit Ice cream: There is nothing in the whole world that can't be solved with a delicious Passion fruit ice cream.
5. Travelling: There's a lot of places waiting to being discovered and a lot of beautiful skylines to know. Having a lot of memories from the places I visit definitely makes me happy.
6. Eating: I love trying new tastes, althought it doesn't work all the times.
7.Sleeping after a long day: Just like everyone else, sometimes I don't have a good days, and I can't wait to go home and sleep in my bed.
8. Walking surrounded by the nature: When I need perspective, thinking about an important decision or when I just want to feel relaxed, there are no better activity than going to the park or the "Jardin Botánico" in my city for get a walk.
9. A warm shower: It is my preferred activity in the morning.
10. Learning: Off course learning is on the list: learning about myself, learning a language, learning a new statistical model or just learning to take a photo. I love the feeling of doing something with my mind.

Thanks in advance for correcting my writing!

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