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中国的一周字 (第一个) 二零一八年二月五日 格雷厄姆大卫 比较 bǐjiǎo to compare; contrast; relatively; fairly; quite; rather 比如 bǐrú for example; for instance 为了 wèile for; for the sake of; in order to; for the purpose of 关于 guānyú about; on; with regard to; concerning 或者 huòzhě perhaps; maybe; or; either..or 重要 zhòngyào important 意见 yìjiàn idea; view; opinion; suggestion; complaints 危险 wēixiǎn dangerous 我们现在的情况比较困难。 Wǒmen xiànzài de qíngkuàng bǐjǐao kùnnán. We’re in a rather difficult situation now. 他的意见和你的意见,我觉得你的意见比较理智。 Tā de yìjiàn hé tā de yìjiàn, wǒ jué de nǐ de yìjiàn bǐjiǎo lǐzhì Between his idea and yours, I think yours is more rational. 我想试着另一种的工作,比如当救生员。 Wǒ xiǎng shìzhe lìng yī zhǒng de gōngzuò, rúguǒ dāng jiùshēng yuán. I want to try another type of job, for example working as a lifeguard. 为了安全,门必须锁定。 Wèile ānquán, mén bìxū suǒdìng. The door has to be locked for safety reasons. 有很多的种类型的动物住在中国,比如大熊猫。 Yǒu hěn duō de zhǒng lèixíng de dòngwù zhù zài zhōngguó, bǐrú dà xíongmāo There are many types of animals that live in China, for example the giant panda. 医学生在图书馆在读关于医学的书。 Yīxué shēng zài túshū guǎn zàidú guānyú yīxué de shū The medical student is reading a book about medicine in the library. 她为了放松下班以后的时候,她喜欢听音乐或者看一本书。 Tā wèile fàngsōng xiàbān yǐhòu de shíhòu , tā xǐhuān tīng yīnyuè huòzhě kàn yī běn shū. In order to relax after she gets off work, she likes to listen to music or read book. 中国的国际地位越来越重要。 Zhōngguó de guójì dìwèi yuèláiyuè zhòngyào. China’s international status is more and more important. 很多人持有不同的意见对这个主题。 Hěn duō rén chíyǒu bùtóng de yìjiàn duì zhè ge zhǔtí. Many people hold differing opinions about this topic. 作为一名消防员是一项危险的工作。 Zuòwéi yī míng xiāofáng yuán yī xiàng wéixiǎn de gōngzuò. Being a firefighter is a dangerous job.

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他的意见和你的意见,我觉得你的意见比较理智。 Tā de yìjiàn hé tā de yìjiàn, wǒ jué de nǐ de yìjiàn bǐjiǎo lǐzhì Between his idea and yours, I think yours is more rational.

他的意见和你的意见,我觉得你的比较理智。

The "意见" in the second clause is unnecessary. Similar to that in English.

为了安全,门必须锁定。 Wèile ānquán, mén bìxū suǒdìng. The door has to be locked for safety reasons.

为了安全,门必须锁上。

锁定:aim at, target at, eg. 锁定目标

锁上:lock (v.)

有很多的种类型的动物住在中国,比如大熊猫。 Yǒu hěn duō de zhǒng lèixíng de dòngwù zhù zài zhōngguó, bǐrú dà xíongmāo There are many types of animals that live in China, for example the giant panda.

中国有很多种类的动物,比如大熊猫。

Yours is weird, but it's correct tho. We prefer to use "有..." for "there be" sentences.

PS: "种类" and "类型" are synonyms. "种类型" is an incorrect expression.

医学生在图书馆在读关于医学的书。 Yīxué shēng zài túshū guǎn zàidú guānyú yīxué de shū The medical student is reading a book about medicine in the library.

医学院的学生在图书馆里读药学的书。

Again, yours is fine.

她为了放松下班以后的时候,她喜欢听音乐或者看一本书。 Tā wèile fàngsōng xiàbān yǐhòu de shíhòu , tā xǐhuān tīng yīnyuè huòzhě kàn yī běn shū. In order to relax after she gets off work, she likes to listen to music or read book.

下班以后,她喜欢听音乐或者读书放松一下。

In this case, i would rather put the adverb clause of purpose "放松一下" at the end of the sentence. Similar to the order of "After work, she likes to listen to music or read books (in order) to relax."

很多人持有不同的意见对这个主题。 Hěn duō rén chíyǒu bùtóng de yìjiàn duì zhè ge zhǔtí. Many people hold differing opinions about this topic.

对这个话题,很多人持不同的意见。

很多人对这个话题持不同的意见。

You can put "对这个话题" at the beginning or in the middle, but not at the end of the sentence.

The rest sounds good to me. Well done ;)

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