Could someone review my mini essay

She had a was hardly in pain, but Nastya was patient and didn't go to a hospital. For On the 3rd day, Nastya had decided to go to the hospital. The surgeon said that Nastya had an injury and it was necessary to make take an X-ray in the 42rnd office. It turned out that Nastya had broken a bone.

The doctor said that Nastya had to stay in the hospital to recover. Nastya was upset because she wanted to meet with her  friends, but soon her friends had come came to visit her in the hospital. That day the chamber 42 42nd office bacame the most cheerful chamber office in the hospital.
There were 3 girls in the Nastya's office. The first had broken a leg, another was bitten by a snake and the third hads broken an arm too. The Girls were playing board games and talking a lot.
In 6 weeks Nastya had been got out of the hospital and had removed  the plaster removed. Nastya got used to her arm. Soon she began to move her hand again. It was a useful experience for Nastya. She became more attentive and careful. You should Bbe as like Nastya:)

Well done Anastasia!

I've corrected 'chamber' to 'office', but I think you might mean 'ward'? This is the room in a hospital where a patient stays overnight. Also, have a look at the difference between the past perfect and the past simple tenses. I think this will help you!

Caroline