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Which country would you like to visit for two weeks? To begin with, I enjoy travelling very much. I have been to several countries in Europe. But if I had the opportunity to go wherever I want, I would choose a journey to New Zealand. I have at least two reasons for that choice. The first reason is the miraculous wild nature of this country. New Zealand is situated on two islands, but despite this fact, it has a variety of landscapes, such as mountains and plains, rivers and lakes. People there care about the nature indeed, that is why they have kept it pristine. Within those two weeks I would try every kind of outdoors activity: hiking, cycling, rock climbing, sailing. Not in every country, you can do it on a such small territory. Moreover, I was told that no big predators inhabited there. To my mind, it’s a crucial advantage for the tourists who prefer travelling safely. I’m certainly that type of person. My second reason may seem a little odd because it is connected with my another hobby – J.R.R.Tolkien’s oeuvre. As far as I know, Peter Jackson shot “The Lord of the Rings” trilogy in New Zealand. I was truly fascinated with landscapes shown in those films. Surely, I would like to see all the scenery I could find there. It’s like to step into that magic world for a while. Who will refuse to meet elves or dwarves if one has a chance? In conclusion, I would like to add that visiting New Zealand is one of my dreams, as you may see from this essay. Unfortunately, I doubt I can ever go there because of enormous duration of the flight. I can hardly endure trip to Egypt which lasts for 4 hours, so 14 hours will be definitely unbearable. Nevertheless, I keep hoping that one day my dream comes true.

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Which country would you like to visit for two weeks?

To begin with, I enjoy travelling very much. I have been to several countries in Europe. But if I had the opportunity to go wherever I wanted, (second conditional) I would choose a journey to New Zealand. I have at least two reasons for that choice.

The first reason is the miraculous wild nature of this country. New Zealand is situated on two islands, but despite this fact, it has a variety of landscapes, such as mountains and plains, rivers and lakes. (Why would being on two islands affect the landscape?) People there care about the nature indeed, that which is why they have kept it pristine.(You cannot use that in a non-defining clause) Within those two weeks I would try every kind of outdoors activity: hiking, cycling, rock climbing, sailing. Not in every country, you can do it on offers such a wide choice within a such a small territory. Moreover, I was told that no big predators inhabited the islands there. To my mind, it’s a crucial advantage for the tourists who prefer travelling safely. I’m certainly that type of person.

My second reason may seem a little odd because it is connected with my another hobby – J.R.R.Tolkien’s oeuvre. As far as I know, Peter Jackson shot “The Lord of the Rings” trilogy in New Zealand. I was truly fascinated with the landscapes shown in those films. Surely, I would like to see all the scenery I could find there. It’s like to step into that magic world for a while. Who will refuse to meet elves or dwarves if one has a chance?

In conclusion, I would like to add that visiting New Zealand is one of my dreams, as you may see from this essay. Unfortunately, I doubt I can ever go there because of the enormous duration of the flight. I can hardly endure a trip to Egypt which lasts for just 4 hours, so 14 hours will be definitely unbearable. Nevertheless, I keep hoping that one day my dream will come  comes true.

Very well written.

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