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Correct my mistakes please! The role of British music and its influence on a world musical culture. Essay. The powerful role of British music and its influence on a world musical culture. For centuries Great Britain has had an enormous contribution and influence on a world musical culture. It has been produced original ideas and examples to the whole world. Folk music and folk dancing formed the basis of development in any music. Apart from this British music has had different types of it: popular music, sacred music, secular music, bridal and funeral music. First of all, popular music was formed due to entertaining genres for instance minstrels performed their songs for amusement people in fairs and different celebrations. Secondly, classical music was formed due to sacred and secular music. Modern popular British music is different and rich due to assorted nations and cultures. On the whole, it were British who have had an affect on an establishment of the various world musical styles. It was legendary "The Beatles"who are the prototype popular modern rock bands. Four musicians caused a real furor among the conservative British in 1960s. They used cactus monodic, rhythm and other elements of pop music. "Queen" is the most popular rock band of 1970s. Their songs are still popular nowadays and have cover-versions. Their songs "We will rock you" and "We are the champions" are high quality arena rock songs. Their music is still well sold. The Queen's frontman Freddie Mercury is the best frontman in a music history. Elton John is the most popular musician of 1960s. He was inducted into the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. Elton John was appointed a Commander of the Order of the British Empire. "Iron Maiden" is an English heavy metal band. They are the pioneers of the new wave of British heavy metal of 1980s. Iron Maiden's music has "influenced generations of newer metal acts from legends like "Metallica" to current stars like "Avenged Sevenfold". "Rock music is more than just a music, it is the energetic centre of a new culture and the youth revolution". Therefore, rock music is not just an art, not an ideology, it is the system of values and a lifestyle.

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Correct my mistakes please! The role of British music and its influence on a world musical culture.

Essay.
The powerful role of British music and its influence on a world musical culture.
For centuries Great Britain has had an enormous contribution and influence on a world musical culture. It has been produced original ideas and examples to the whole world.
Folk music and folk dancing formed the basis of development in all music. Apart from this, British music has had different types of it: popular music, sacred music, secular music, bridal and funeral music.
First of all, popular music was formed from entertaining genres: for instance, minstrels performed their songs for the amusement of  people in fairs and different celebrations.
Secondly, classical music was formed from a basis of sacred and secular music.
Modern popular British music is different and rich due to the influence of assorted nations and cultures. On the whole, it was the British who had an effect on the establishment of the various world musical styles.(THIS SENTENCE ISN'T PARTICULARLY CLEAR: I'M NOT EXACTLY SURE WHAT YOU MEAN HERE). 
It was the  legendary " Beatles"who were the prototype for popular modern rock bands.
These four musicians caused a real furore among the conservative British in the 1960s. They used cactus monodic, rhythm and other elements of pop music.
"Queen" was the most popular rock band of the1970s. Their songs are still popular nowadays and have cover-versions. Their songs "We will rock you" and "We are the champions" are high quality arena rock songs. Their music still sells well..  Queen's frontman Freddie Mercury is the best frontman in a music history.
Elton John is the most popular musician of the 1960s. He was inducted into the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. Elton John was appointed a Commander of the Order of the British Empire.
"Iron Maiden" is an English heavy metal band. They were the pioneers of the new wave of British heavy metal of the 1980s. Iron Maiden's music has "influenced generations of newer metal acts from legends like "Metallica" to current stars like "Avenged Sevenfold".
"Rock music is more than just a type of music, it is the energetic centre of a new culture and the youth revolution". Therefore, rock music is not just an art, nor an ideology, it is a system of values and a lifestyle.

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