2011.06.13

Today is Monday. Everyone are unhappy,because we all begin to work for a new week.And today is so hot.My seat couldn't feel any cold air from the air conditioner.

先说两个我肯定的错误啊，说天气主语只能是it,所以应该说It's so hot today.还有一个就是你的seat怎么会有feel呢？应该是I cannot feel any ...in my seat.

然后再说一个我不是特别确定的啊。第三个小句子里边，begin to worlk 是瞬时性的，for a week是延时性的，不能一起用，你就说we will work for a new week,或者It's a new week,we will begin to work.应该会好一点。