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Watch the movie When it snow, it makes me want to watch "Edward Scissorhands"

I like love story movies.

I think...There are man hurt a wonan, even without scissorhands.

I don't know why but I love such a guy.

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Hi Chie

Watching a movie - or - Watching movies - is a better headline. 

When it snows, it makes me want to watch "Edward Scissorhands"

I like love story movies.

I think...Man are hurting women, even without scissor hands.

I don't know why but I love such guys. 


Tidy written, well done. 

I think you could improve your writing skill on looking at basic grammar tenses like the present simple and the present continuous. Here is an example.


Present Simple: Subject + Verb (s)

I             play 

You       write 


He          likes

She        loves

It            snows


You        read 

We         eat 

They     watch


Basic rule for the present simple tense:  he/she/it always uses an s at the end of the verb. 


Present continuous: Subject + verb 'to be' + verb(ing) 

I           am        playing     

You      are      writing 


He       is       dancing

She     is       eating 

It         is snowing 


You     are    learning

We      are    driving 

They   are    swimming


Basic rule for the present continuous tense: Subject related verb 'to be' and verb + ing 


And by the way, in English many words change form if they are plural - more than one. 

Singular (1)

one woman 

Plural (2 / more than 1) 

two women


Hope that helps. 

Chris


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Watch the movie

When it snows, it makes me want to watch "Edward Scissorhands"

I like love story movies. (or "I like love stories")

I think...There are man men who hurt a wonan women, even without scissorhands.

I don't know why but I love such a guy.


nicely done :)

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Watch the movie

When it snows, it makes me want to watch "Edward Scissorhands"

I like love story movies.

I think...There are men who hurt women, even without scissorhands.

I don't know why but I love such a guy.

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