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Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well Some people says that successful person try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well, and others disagree. In my opinion I strongly agree with that people who get success are tendency of trying new things and take possibility of danger rather than only doing things they know ways to do. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, it is very easy for people who have lots of money to use them since if they lose much money, they have money more than that they used. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a university student, I have a friend, John, his family was very rich. During summer vacation in second grade, he started playing card game with betting his money. He did not know how to play and how it was dangerous but he uses a lot of money and lost many games. The total money he spended on them amounted to 10000 dollars during summer vacation. If he belonged to my family, we have many depts, also he would have think more carefully about playing games. However, he said that it does not matter for him after summer holiday because his parents had lots of money. For these reasons, I strongly believes that people who succeeded and have lots of money afford trying many things without caring about risks. Secondly, people who succeeded must have experienced too many things, so their life is quite boring. And, this results in that they want to try different things they did in order to escape from their boring life. For instance, my company’s' chairman, Saito, had a great successful when he was young. So their children experienced a lot of things like traveling around the world. And, due to what they did, their usual life becomes so boring. As a result, they tend to try new things that they have never tried before whatever it takes much money. Accordingly, in order to make successful people' life enjoyable, they need to try new things. In conclusion, I strongly agree with that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. This is because, they have money to afford doing new thing without worrying about money and their life became boring.

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Thank you for comment. I want you to know that this is the writing question, so I need to answer it correctly from the view of "Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well". Actually my opion is different from this answer. I strongly agree with your idea that "risks don't depend on the money". Our family are normal, I mean not rich, but I wanna experience a lot of things. That is why I wanna study in Canadian university. To realize my goal, I need to earn money. So I'm gonna work for one year and a half. What I'm trying doesn't sound good in Japan because Japanese people sometimes like conventional way to enroll in the university after graduation from high school. But I wanna see a lot of things than others do. What I wanna say is that money is not important, crucial thing is mind to try something. I'm impressed "One can born poor its his/her fate, but one can die poor it's their mistake"
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Hi Jay, Totally agreed from your views that taking risks in our life to get success is as such important having food daily to live. Many people afraid to come out to there comfort zone and try to do the things that they are comfortable with, but they don't know doing such things in this way will create the condition that there learning world will be kept in a very small place and they will never extend or expose the things outside this small world. If we want anything in our life we have to understand that at every phase of our life we need to try the things by coming out from our comfort zone and have faith on yourself like yes we can do this and give our 100 percent to achieve this. But on the other part I am not agreeing with you that the person having more money only they can afford to take risks, risks don't depend on the money, risk is like the thing that you are going to do have belief that yes I can do this and its like unplanned activity you are doing that thing without keeping anything in your mind, you just want to do this that's why your doing, with no plans, you have the guts to face any uncertainty if it happens, you are willing the things move to the right path if anything goes wrong. A person having money also take the risks and the person don't have that also take risks. You can see many of the entrepreneurs examples that how they were earlier and how become they will made after taking risks. A proverb is like "One can born poor its his/her fate, but one can die poor it's their mistake".

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