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A lady bought bags Last week, A smiled lady in a loose pink dress stood at the window for an expensive shop.She hesitated for a moment, and went in the handbag shops finally.The young assistant who served her and glancing at her Scornfully. And was very rude to the lady. The lady was very angry. She saw handbags just a little moment, she swept the card and bought two bags. The assistant was very surprised.The following morning, the lady dressed in a fur coat and let the babysitter returned to the bag shop with the bag she had bought yesterday, and asked the other clerks to call the manager.She criticized the assistant's attitude and returned two bag.,The manager was polited said  sorry to the lady .the lady was reselected two bags and go home.

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Last week a lady with a smile on her face, in a loose pink dress stood in front of the window of an expensive shop. She hesitated for a moment then finally went in the handbag store. The young assistant who served her glanced at her scornfully and was very rude. This angered the woman. She browsed handbags as quick as a snap of a finger, chose two bags and swiped the card. The assistant was very surprised. The following morning the lady dressed in a fur coat and let the babysitter return the bags she had bought yesterday. The woman asked the other clerks to call the manager. She complained of the assistant's treatment and returned the goods. The manager was polite and apologized to his customer. The woman replaced her two bags and returned home.
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A lady bought bags

Last week, a smiling lady in a loose pink dress stood at the window of an expensive shop. She hesitated for a moment and then finally went into shop. The young assistant who served her glowered at her and was very rude to the lady. The lady became very angry. She saw her purchases for just a moment then swept the card and bought two bags. The assistant was very surprised. The following morning the lady dressed in a fur coat and made the babysitter return to the bag shop the bags bought yesterday. The babysitter then asked the other clerks to call the manager. She criticized the assistant's attitude and returned the two bags. The manager politely said sorry to the lady. The lady reselected two bags and went home.

Very well written!

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Your story is very good, a moral, a villain, a hero. Your message was clear and you will only improve with your writing and your imagination is really cool.

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