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一切在变。 这周未我听过我九月就会上大学。有太多的事情我需要考虑到,太多的事情要做。接下来的几月会很忙。 This weekend I heard I was accepted by the School of Oriental and African Studies. There’s so much I need to think about, so many things I need to do, the next few months will be very busy. 我需要搬家到伦敦,为我三只猫找到一个好的地方生活,(我会很想念我的小猫)。我也需要买很多的书。I need to move to London, find a good home for my cats ( I will miss my cats). I also need to buy lots of books. 这课程有很多要读的书,开学以前,我必须阅读四本。在英国我们叫它Pre entry reading。那些书看起来很有趣的,它们叫 《A History of Chinese Civilization》、《A Guide to Chinese Literature》、《Chinese》和《A new Introduction to Classical Chinese》。我真的很期待阅读它们。 This course has many set books, before school starts I need to read 4. In England we call this ’Pre Entry Reading‘ The books look very interesting, they are called 'A History of Chinese Civilization', 'A Guide to Chinese Literature', 'Chinese' and 'A new Introduction to Classical Chinese'. I'm really looking forward to reading them. 上大学不便宜,我得改变我的生活方式,开始储蓄。我还不能相信我被亚非学院录取了。考上了这所大学,就像考上了牛津大学或剑桥大学!他们只招收最优秀,最聪明的学生,是很难拿到名额, 让每个学生都垂涎三尺! Going to university is not cheap, I have to change my life style, start saving. I still can't believe I got accepted by SOAS. Getting into this university is like getting into Oxford or Cambridge. they only accept the best, most brightest students, places are very hard to get, makes every student drool! 我知道妈妈为我感到很自豪, 但我也知道,她也非常担心我们怎么能支付一切。我的家不是很有钱。搬家后,我需要找到一份很好的工作!帮助支付我的生活支出。 I know my mum is proud of me, but I also know she is very worried about how we will pay for everything. My family's not rich. After I move I need to find a good job, help pay for living expenses. 我的整个人生快就会改变!这是很令人兴奋的,而同时是很吓人的! My whole life is about to change. Its exciting, yet scary at the same time!

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一切在变。

一切将要改变

这周未我听过我九月就会上大学。有太多的事情我需要考虑到,太多的事情要做。接下来的几月会很忙。

这个周末我得知,我被(伦敦大学)亚非学院录取了。(这样),会有很多事需要考虑,也有很多事要做。(所以)在接下来的几个月里,我会非常忙。
This weekend I heard I was accepted by the School of Oriental and African Studies. There’s so much I need to think about, so many things I need to do, the next few months will be very busy.

我需要搬家到伦敦,为我三只猫找到一个好的地方生活,(我会很想念我的小猫)。我也需要买很多的书。

我要搬到伦敦去,(同时),帮我的猫猫们找一户好人家(我会很想它们的)。(另外,)我也要买很多书。

I need to move to London, find a good home for my cats ( I will miss my cats). I also need to buy lots of books.

这课程有很多要读的书,开学以前,我必须阅读四本。在英国我们叫它Pre entry reading。那些书看起来很有趣的,它们叫 《A History of Chinese Civilization》、《A Guide to Chinese Literature》、《Chinese》和《A new Introduction to Classical Chinese》。我真的很期待阅读它们。

这个专业有很多必修课,在开学之前,我就要读4门。在英国,我们把它叫做“学前预习”。这些书看起来也蛮有趣的,像《中国文明史》、《中国文学导读》、《汉语》和《新中国古代简介》,我确实很想看。
This course has many set books, before school starts I need to read 4. In England we call this ’Pre Entry Reading‘ The books look very interesting, they are called 'A History of Chinese Civilization', 'A Guide to Chinese Literature', 'Chinese' and 'A new Introduction to Classical Chinese'. I'm really looking forward to reading them.

上大学不便宜,我得改变我的生活方式,开始储蓄。我还不能相信我被亚非学院录取了。考上了这所大学,就像考上了牛津大学或剑桥大学!他们只招收最优秀,最聪明的学生,是很难拿到名额, 让每个学生都垂涎三尺!

上大学不便宜啊,我得调整我的生活方式,开始存钱。我还是不敢相信我已经被伦敦大学亚非学院录取了。(你不知道,)考上这所大学就像考上牛津大学或者剑桥大学(一样难),他们只招收那些最优秀和最聪明的学生。那个名额是很难拿到的,弄的很多学生看着直流口水。

Going to university is not cheap, I have to change my life style, start saving. I still can't believe I got accepted by SOAS. Getting into this university is like getting into Oxford or Cambridge. they only accept the best, most brightest students, places are very hard to get, makes every student drool!

我知道妈妈为我感到很自豪, 但我也知道,她也非常担心我们怎么能支付一切。我的家不是很有钱。搬家后,我需要找到一份很好的工作!帮助支付我的生活支出。

我知道,我妈妈为我感到骄傲,但我也知道,她很担心我们该如何来支撑这一切,(因为)我家不是很宽裕。(所以)在我搬家后,我要找一份好工作来帮助我分担日常开销。
I know my mum is proud of me, but I also know she is very worried about how we will pay for everything. My family's not rich. After I move I need to find a good job, help pay for living expenses.

我的整个人生快就会改变!这是很令人兴奋的,而同时是很吓人的!
我的整个人生就要改变啦!真让人激动呀!但同时,我也很担忧。

My whole life is about to change. Its exciting, yet scary at the same time!

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真厉害,一个售货员竟然有这么大的热情来学习中文,代表中国人民严重支持和欢迎!!!哈哈。什么时候来中国留学呀,
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"This weekend I heard I was ..." 顯然, 這是 "上個週末"表示過去, 而華語的"這個週末"卻表示未來
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恭禧你,一定期待又興奮,好好享受它,相信能為你帶來不凡的人生經驗:)
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恭喜你了,能读书进修是提升自己的很好机会。现在付出的学费,以后可以赚回来的。 我现在也在读书,是汉语国际推广硕士专业,虽然学费也很贵,每周六都要连续上课很辛苦,但很有收获。

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