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Could you correct my entry, please) We didn't get news from our Indian friend Tom a long time. What was our Tom been doing recently? He has lots of projects and dreams? Tom is working on the documentary film project jointly by a costume designer of Tata Star TV channel. The movie shows police of different countries such as Russia, Korea , Israel and South Africa. Also he has much work with uniform project for a luxury jewelry boutique. Boutique's stuff will wear clothes which is made by Tom. However the most important news is that our friend is going to visit us very very soon. And this time he has a multiple entry visa for 1 year. It means he is going to arrive to us more often. Hooray! And what about his new fashion collection? It is fabualos! His creative works reflect Slavic influence. Look at these wooly and linen jackets with gorgeous embroideris. These are fantastic! On our question, "How can you imagine all of that?" Tom replied, "People inspire me". What a modesty! Tom beleive that there is a lot of not utilised talents in Russia and people from different cultures could work together and creat many new ideas and develop new products. We can't wait for you, Tom.

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Could you correct my entry, please)

We haven't gotten news from our Indian friend Tom in a long time. What has our Tom been doing recently? Does he have lots of projects and dreams? Tom is working on a documentary film project with a costume designer who works for Tata Star TV channel. The movie shows police from different countries such as Russia, Korea, Israel and South Africa.
He is also working on a uniform project for a luxury jewelry boutique. The boutique's stuff will wear clothes which are made by Tom.
However, the most important news is that our friend is going to visit us very very soon. And this time he has a multiple entry visa for 1 year. It means he is going to visit us more often. Hooray!
And what about his new fashion collection? It is fabulous! His creative works reflect Slavic influence. Look at these wool and linen jackets with gorgeous embroideries. These are fantastic!
When we asked, "How can you imagine all of that?" Tom replied, "People inspire me". How modest!
Tom believes that there is a lot of unutilized talent in Russia, and people from different cultures could work together and create many new ideas, and develop new products.
We can't wait for you, Tom.

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