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1/31 my diary(please improve) I skipped writting diary yesterday because I am lazy person.

I have to reflect.

Eventhough I decided to write my diary everyday last week, I skipped twice time

My teacher told me that the most important thing for learning english is keep learning continuonusly.

I should think about it more seriously.

Yesterday, I went to ''kushidori'' is a tavern where serves grilled chikens.

I talked with my friend and ate a lot of chikens.

I was very satisfied but when I looked my bill, I surprised. It was 10.000yen...... I thought I have to save my money.

And before going my bed, I watched

a movie '' The load of the rings''

The movie was soooo nice

I think I've watched the movie 20times at least, because I love this movie best.

Although I am a big fan of this movie, I've never read the original novel, because it's too diffiecult for me to read.

In future, I wish I would be

able to read this novel without dictionary

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I skipped writing in my diary yesterday because I am a lazy person.

I have to reflect.

Even though I decided to write in my diary everyday last week, I skipped it twice time.

My teacher told me that the most important thing for learning English is to keep learning continuously.

I should seriously think about it more.

Yesterday, I went to ''kushidori'' it is a tavern that serves grilled chicken.

I talked with to my friend and ate a lot of chicken.

I was very satisfied but when I looked at my bill, I was surprised. It was 10.000yen...... I  knew I would have to save my money.

And before going to bed, I watched

a movie  '' The Lord of the Rings"'

The movie was soooo nice.

I think I've watched the movie 20 times at least, because I love this movie best. It is the best.

Although I am a big fan of this movie, I've never read the original novel, because it's too difficult  for me to read.

In the future, I hope that I am

able to read this novel without a dictionary.

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1/31 my diary (please improve)

I skipped writing in my diary yesterday because I am a lazy person.

I have to reflect.

Even though I decided to write in my diary everyday last week, I skipped two times.

My teacher told me that the most important thing to do when learning english is to keep learning continuously.

I should think about it more seriously.

Yesterday, I went to ''kushidori.'' It is a tavern that serves grilled chicken.

I talked with my friend and ate a lot of chicken.

I was very satisfied, but when I looked my bill, I was surprised. It was 10.000 yen...... I thought I would have to save my money.

Before going to bed, I watched the movie ''The Lord of the Rings.''

The movie was soooo good.

I think I've watched the movie 20 times at least, because it is my favorite.   (OR: ...because it is the best.)

Although I am a big fan of this movie, I've never read the original novel, because it's too difficult for me to read.

In future, I hope I will be able to read this novel without using a dictionary

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