Capitalist society
Spending money is more important than saving for a large group of people. This occurs mainly because of media pressure and our materialist society. This issue is extremely harmful for humanity and the environment, because there is an endless production of waste that we will not be able to handle in the future.
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A large group of people prefer to spend rather than save money. This occurs mainly because of the media's pressure and our materialist society. This is an important issue because the endless production of waste, for which there is no easy solution, is extremely harmful for humanity and the environment.
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Capitalist society
For a large group of people, spending money is more important than saving. This is mainly because of media pressure and our materialistic society. This is extremely harmful for humanity and for the environment, because there is an endless production of waste that we will not be able to handle in the future.
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Thank you, Michael! :D
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This makes perfect sense, you don't need to change anything. Personally I'd probably write something like 'materialist-driven society' and "there is *now* an endless production of waste" but these are purely ad-hoc suggestions, you don't need to include them - it's fine as it is... Well done! :)
EDIT: Upon re-reading it, I'd strongly suggest you include the word now in this sentence: "there is *now* an endless production of waste..."
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