Please help me correct the IELTS writing task 1! Thanks! The graph compares the proportion of male and female taking daily exercise in Australia in 2010. Male citizens aged 15 to 24 showed the biggest passion for daily exercise,up to 52.8%.Surprising,the figure dropped sharply between men in 25-34 age group (42.2%) and aged 35-44(39.5%) respectively.While there was a reverse trend among men aged over 45 that the percentage of doing regular physical activity rose steadily from 43.1% to 46.7%. Female citizens presented a different pattern.Women in their forties enjoyed exercise most,as much as 53.3%.Meanwhile,there was no huge diversity between women aged from 25 to 45 as well as from 45 to 54,which are 52.5% and 53.3% respectively.But the figure increased steadily,despite fluctuation,until the age period of over 64,which suffered a sharp decrease,sown to 47.1%. Overall,the gender gap among different age groups was getting widen until people in their forties.Finally,there was almost no difference when the masses reached the age of 65.