New York City for the first time I visited to N.Y. city in the end of 2017 for the first time in my life. actually, I'm not so crazy for the States but I wanted to visit to the N.Y. because I still ha

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Yuta Sugano

New York City for the first time I visited to N.Y. city in the end of 2017 for the first time in my life. actually, I'm not so crazy for the States but I wanted to visit to the N.Y. because I still had had an imagine that that the city was the center of the world and I wanted to see it. In fact, the city was so interesting for me and it was so good having chosen the N.Y. as the destination of my journey in this time. The most interesting and amazing thin of the city for me was its diversity. I visited to the Jewish community in district Williamsburg, Russian community in Brighton beach and Latin community in Corona, in Queens and everything was so curious and interesting!! I was there just a week but if there is a chance, I'd like to o back to the city to know it more. Finally, N.Y. turned into the one of my favorite city in this world.

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New York City for the first time

I visited to N.Y. city in at the end of 2017 for the first time in my life. Actually, I'm not so crazy about for the States but I wanted to visit to the N.Y. because I still had had an image imagine that that the city was the center of the world and I wanted to see it.
In fact, the city was so interesting for me and it was so good having chosen the N.Y. as the destination of my journey in this time.

<In fact, the city was very interesting and it was a good choice for my trip.

The most interesting and amazing thing about of the city for me was its diversity. I visited to the Jewish community in district Williamsburg, the Russian community in Brighton beach and the Latin community in Corona, in Queens and everything was so curious and interesting!!
I was there just a week but, if there is a chance, I'd like to go back to the city to get to know it more better.
Finally, N.Y. turned into the one of my favorite cities in this world.

-In the US we don't use the word curious this way. I think the British might though because I have seen it like this before.

I visited to N.Y. city NYC in for the first time in my life at the end of 2017. for the first time in my life. Actually, I'm not so crazy for the States but I wanted to visit to the N.Y. NY because I still had had an imagine the idea that that the city was the center of the world, and I wanted to see it.

In fact, the city was so interesting for to me, and it was so good having chosen the N.Y. NY as the destination of my journey in this time.
The most interesting and amazing thing of about the city, for me, was its diversity. I visited to the Jewish community in the district Williamsburg district, the Russian community in Brighton Beach, and the Latin community in Corona, in Queens. and Everything was so curious and interesting!!

I was there for just a week, but if there is a chance for me to return, I'd like to go back to the city to come to know it even more.
Finally In conclusion, N.Y. NY has turned into the one of my most favorite city cities in this world.

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