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The pie charts depict the factors for undergraduates and postgraduates choosing Parker University to study.
It is noticeable that postgraduates and undergraduate consider the most on reputation of university, with the proportion of 42% and 35% respectively. 32% of postgraduates and 24% undergraduates choose Parker University for cost.
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It's short.Could u help me? Thanks!:D
The pie charts represents the reasons undergraduates and postgraduates gave when choosing Parker University for their studies.It is noticeable that postgraduates and undergraduates consider the reputation of the university to be most important, with the proportion of 42% and 35% respectively. Whereas only 32% of postgraduates and 24% undergraduates chose Parker University based on the cost of studying there.
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You use many key terms appropriate to the exam task :)
You might like to add discourse markers to make it clear to the examiner that you are analysing the major and minor trends. For example:
MAJOR:
"The two major factors postgraduate students consider when choosing a university are.... in comparison, undergraduate students tend to consider ......, ...... and ..... as the most important factors.
MINOR:
Notably, postgraduates consider cost more heavily than undergraduates (32% versus 24%). The latter put more weight in personal recommendations than the former (more than twice as much, 18% versus 6%). Accomodation availability is of almost equal important for both types of students (7% for UG, 8% for PG)
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