My father's story
My father had been a elementary school teacher before. But he had been thinking want be a baker from that time through. So he was retired early and studied about a bakery shop from first,and finaly, he could be opened a bakery shop himself. He looks be hard at his work everyday but I respect him who fulfilled a dream himself.
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My father's story
My father had been used to be an elementary school teacher before. But he had been thinking want about being a baker from that time through at that time. So, he was retired took early retirement and studied about a bakery shop from first bachelor's degree programs in baking, and finally, he could was able be opened to open a bakery shop by himself. He looks be looks(is) hard persistent at his work everyday but, and I respect him who that he fulfilled a his dream himself.1
My father's story
My father was an elementary school teacher before, but he wanted to become a baker instead, so he retired early and studied about bakery first. And finally, he ran a bakery shop himself. He seemed to be working hard at his work everyday. I respect him, because he has fulfilled a dream himself.1
My father's story
My father had been a elementary school teacher before. But he had been thinking about wanting to be a baker from that time through on. So he was retired early and studied about a bakery shop from first basic,and finally, he could be opened a bakery shop himself. He looks be hard at his work hardworking (or "he looks like he works hard") everyday but I respect him who fulfilled a dream himself.0
My father was originally an elementary school teacher, at that time he/* thought about becoming a baker many times.
So he retired early/** and studied bakery until he could finally open a bakery by himself.
He is working hard everyday now/***, I respect him because he fulfilled his dream by himself.
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*while he was a teacher he... thought about becoming........
**So he switched careers and..... and studied bakery until............
***It looks like he's hard at work now, I respect him because.......
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