1/28 my diary(please improve)

I forgot to write in my diary yesterday, so I have to write twice as many sentences as usual.

It's a penalty for my laziness.

Today, I'm going to talk about my hobbies.

My hobbies are sleeping, eating, stopping by a lot of coffee shops, and watching movies.

The most interesting movie I watched recently is Kingsman.

Kingsman is a very funny movie and full of jokes and wit.

Of course, the story is very good, but the acting was extraordinarily good.

The main character ''Eggsy'' is a boy who lost his father by accident.

The actor who plays ''Eggsy'' acted so emotionally. He succeeded in expressing one boy's very complex emotions.

He's very cool.

I'm going recommend Kingsman to my friends.

I forgot writting my diary yesterday.

So I have to write sentences twice as long as usual.

It's a penalty for my laziness.

Today, I'm going to talk about my hobbies.

My hobbies are sleeping, and eating, and stopping by a lot of coffee shops, and watching movies. (When writing lists of things, you only need "and" for the last thing)

The most interesting movie I watched last recently is kingsman.

Kingsman is such a fun movie and riched with jokes and wit.

Of course, the story is so nice, but actors' performances were extraordinarily nice.

The main character ''eggsy'' is the boy who lost his father by accidet.

The actor who act plays "eggsy'' acted so emotional, and he succeeded in expressin g express the boy's very complex emotions.

He's very cool.

I'm going recommend Kingsman to my friends.

If it the person is male, they are called an actor, if the person is female, they called an actor or an actress. Male actors are never called actresses.