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我最近的作业。 This is for school work, so please if my words are grammatically correct, I should leave them alone! Only corrections of incorrect Chinese please. (Of course suggestions are welcome but please can we make sure I know they are just suggestions lol,thank you) SPECS: You hear that your friend Xiaoming (小明) is unwell, but you do not know what is wrong with him. As he is new to the city in which you live, write an email to him in Chinese characters to show your concern and give him some advice. Write between 80 and 100 characters (advisory length).You should include the following information: ! Start with your friend’s name and a greeting. ! Ask what is wrong with him. ! Find out if he has a temperature or a bit of a cold. ! Tell him that you do not feel well either today. ! Tell him what your problem is (e.g. toothache, stomachache) and what you are going to do about it (e.g. see a doctor). ! Advise your friend to go to see the doctor at the First Hospital. ! Tell him that the First Hospital has both western and Chinese doctors and that they can prescribe Chinese medicine. ! Advise your friend that he should drink plenty of water and rest well. ! Say that you are going to see him tomorrow. ! Say goodbye. 小明,你好。 我听说你很不舒服,怎么了?你哪里不舒服?你发烧吗?有点感冒吗? 今天我也觉得很不舒服,我头疼,肚子疼。今天下午我要去看医生。 你应该去看第一医院的医生。第一医院里有西药医生和中药医生。(About this line, 我可不可以说, 西药医生,中药医生,这家医院都有?)他们能药方中国医药。 你应该多喝开水,应该好好休息吧。 明天我要看见你了。 再见。

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我最近的作业。

This is for school work, so please if my words are grammatically correct, I should leave them alone! Only corrections of incorrect Chinese please. (Of course suggestions are welcome but please can we make sure I know they are just suggestions lol,thank you)

SPECS:
You hear that your friend Xiaoming (小明) is unwell, but you do not know what
is wrong with him. As he is new to the city in which you live, write an email to
him in Chinese characters to show your concern and give him some advice.
Write between 80 and 100 characters (advisory length).You should include the following information:
! Start with your friend’s name and a greeting.
! Ask what is wrong with him.
! Find out if he has a temperature or a bit of a cold.
! Tell him that you do not feel well either today.
! Tell him what your problem is (e.g. toothache, stomachache) and
what you are going to do about it (e.g. see a doctor).
! Advise your friend to go to see the doctor at the First
Hospital.
! Tell him that the First Hospital has both western and Chinese
doctors and that they can prescribe Chinese medicine.
! Advise your friend that he should drink plenty of water and
rest well.
! Say that you are going to see him tomorrow.
! Say goodbye.

小明:

       你好。我听说你不是很舒服,怎么了?你哪里不舒服?你是发烧呢?还是有点感冒呢?今天我也觉得很不舒服,我头疼,肚子疼。今天下午我就要去看医生。我想你也应该去第一医院看看。第一医院里既有医术高超的西医也有能开中药处方中医。还有,你要记得多喝开水,好好休息。明天我会去看你。祝你早日康复。明天见。

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哈哈,写的不错,有点像我们学英语的范文
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突然看到的,称谓“小明”后必须要用冒号“:”,即“小明:”。还有,“你好。”一定要单起一行。我小学时因为这个罚站过一天的
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poor Xiaoming
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我最近的作业。

This is for school work, so please if my words are grammatically correct, I should leave them alone! Only corrections of incorrect Chinese please. (Of course suggestions are welcome but please can we make sure I know they are just suggestions lol,thank you)

SPECS:
You hear that your friend Xiaoming (小明) is unwell, but you do not know what
is wrong with him. As he is new to the city in which you live, write an email to
him in Chinese characters to show your concern and give him some advice.
Write between 80 and 100 characters (advisory length).You should include the following information:
! Start with your friend’s name and a greeting.
! Ask what is wrong with him.
! Find out if he has a temperature or a bit of a cold.
! Tell him that you do not feel well either today.
! Tell him what your problem is (e.g. toothache, stomachache) and
what you are going to do about it (e.g. see a doctor).
! Advise your friend to go to see the doctor at the First
Hospital.
! Tell him that the First Hospital has both western and Chinese
doctors and that they can prescribe Chinese medicine.
! Advise your friend that he should drink plenty of water and
rest well.
! Say that you are going to see him tomorrow.
! Say goodbye.

小明,你好。

我听说你很不舒服,知道是哪里不舒服吗?(怎么了和哪里不舒服有点重复)是感冒了呢还是发烧了呢?(轻的病放在前面,重的病放在后面,表示递进的关系)
我今天头疼,肚子疼,也觉得很不舒服。(如果是今天的话,可以省略今天两字)下午要去看医生。

推荐你(如果是朋友的话,称呼就不要用您了。advise一个医院时,用推荐比较好,推荐用于sth,建议用于do sth)去第一医院看病。那里有西医也有中医(一般都不直接说有什么医生,而是说中医和西医)。 他们可以给你配中药。(prescribe=配药, Chinese medicine=中药,prescribe Chinese medicine = 配中药)
建议你多喝水,好好休息。(这里的advise就翻译成建议了,因为是要do sth)
我明天会去看望你。(看见只表示看到一个人的样子,去见一个病人不只是要看他一眼这么简单,要用看望,表示要见面并安慰他)
再见。

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