Cook.
I really like cooking, especially sweets things.
I make something special to my familly almost every week.
This weekend I made a German pie and I was seaching about it so I saw that actually this especific pie is Brazillian(Campinas), I found it quiet interesting.
Seeing someone eating and enjoying what you made is simply amazing; that's why I think that cooking is an act of love.
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Cook.
I really like cooking, especially sweets things. //You can either say "especially sweets" or if its an adjective then "especially sweet things"I make something special to for my family almost every week.
This weekend I made a German pie and I was researching about it, so I saw that actually this especific specific pie is Brazilian(Campinas).I found it the information quiet interesting. //Writing what "it" is would be more natural.
Seeing someone eating and enjoying what you made is simply amazing. That's why I think that cooking is an act of love. //I don't think the semicolon is necessary here.
//What a delicious entry, YUM! The English was great and I only noticed a few grammar and spelling errors. Keep it up!
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Wow! Looks so yummy!!
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