A sightseeing trip
I had been to Okinawa in the end of 2017 with my family. ( five days and four nights.)
Okinawa is the prefecture in the south of Japan.
It is Winter here in Japan, so it's cold. but It was warm in Okinawa.
The coral reefs in the Okinawa were very beautiful.
I drank strong Okinawa liquor called Awamori. It was very strong, but very tasty.
If you have a chance, please visit Okinawa and try Awamori.
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A sightseeing trip
I went to Okinawa at the end of 2017 with my family for five days and four nights.(Okinawa is the prefecture in the south of Japan.)
It is winter here in Japan, so it's cold. In Okinawa it was warm, though.
The coral reefs in the Okinawa were very beautiful.
I drank strong Okinawa liquor called Awamori. It was very strong, but very tasty.
If you have a chance, please visit Okinawa and try Awamori.
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