The First Snow
I haven't seen the snow for quite a long time. The snow made the whole city a quiet and beautiful place. I was very excited that day and walked out early to enjoy the scene. The road was very slippy and hard to walk. I was cold and the body was telling me to return. But the beauty of the snow forced me to stay. Later that day, I heard that one of my classmates was hit by the fallen branch from a snowy tree. Then I realized both sides of the snow, one side is beauty and peace, the other is inconvenience and danger.
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The First Snow
I hadn't haven't seen the snow for quite a long time. The Snow makes the whole city a quiet and beautiful place. I was very excited that day and went walked out early to enjoy the scene. The road was very slippery and it was hard to walk. I was cold and my the body was telling me to return. But the beauty of the snow forced me to stay. Later that day, I heard that one of my classmates was hit by a the fallen branch that had fallen from a snowy tree. Then I realized both sides of the snow, one side is beauty and peace, the other is inconvenience and danger.0
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