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Venezuela. Can you help me correct it? The situation in Venezuela is unsettling. People who have made the decision of leaving is because of a one and only reason, and that is the impossibility to see a good future there. Venezuela is right now in a fickle situation, which makes it galling to stay. To leave everything you know and everything you are used to is hard, and even harder to leave your family behind to an uncertain future, but they think it is even worse to stay there and get killed for a cellphone or die because of lack of medicine. Venezuela is going through a crisis right now, yet it is a country which may still have much to offer to the world. All in all, with many young people leaving, particularly those who have attended Venezuela’s universities, there is a fear that the country could lose a generation of talent and leadership. However, these people are leaving with a promise to come back again in the future and help rebuild this beautiful country if things turn around. When the moment of coming back arrive, these people will have new cultures and manners from all over the world, which can help reconstruct a much better country.

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Venezuela. Can you help me correct it?

The situation in Venezuela is unsettling. People who have made the decision of leaving to leave is because of a one and for only one reason, and that is the impossibility to see a good future there. Venezuela is right now in a fickle Right now, Venezuela is in a very difficult situation, which makes it galling unthinkable? to stay. To leave everything you know and everything you are used to is hard, and even harder to leave your family behind to an uncertain future, but they think it is even worse to stay there and get killed for a cellphone or die because of lack of medicine. Venezuela is going through a crisis right now, yet it is a country which may still have much to offer to the world.
All in all, with many young people leaving, particularly those who have attended Venezuela’s universities, there is a fear that the country could lose a generation of talent and leadership. However, these people are leaving with a promise to come back again in the future and help rebuild this beautiful country if things turn around. When the moment of coming back to return arrives, these people will have new cultures and manners from all over the world, which can help reconstruct a much better country.
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The situation in Venezuela is unsettling. People have made the decision of leaving because of one and only one reason and that is the impossibility to see a good future there. Venezuela is right now in a fickle situation, which makes it galling to stay. To leave everything you know and everything you are used to is hard, and it's even harder to leave your family behind to an uncertain future, but they think it is even worse to stay there and get killed for a cellphone or die because of a lack of medicine. Venezuela is going through a crisis right now, yet it is a country that may still have much to offer to the world.
All in all, with many young people leaving, particularly those who have attended Venezuela’s universities, there is a fear that the country could lose a generation of talent and leadership. However, these people are leaving with a promise to come back again in the future and help rebuild this beautiful country if things turn around. When the moment of coming back arrives, these people will have new cultures and manners from all over the world, which can help to reconstruct a much better country.

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