PLEASE CORRECT MY GRAMMAR
hello Friend from other World.. I want to share my story. I was a employees. But I decide to resign and now I am a Bussiness woman, I sell some clothes and scarf. I almost don't have weekend. I work everyday. I sell stuff on Market and Store at my House. and Then I found that I must be improve my language skill. tourist has never come here, but I hope someday I found them here and I am want to be first person that can be their guide. I learn it from youtube and app from Playstore. and Finally I found so many friends from Italki. here I am.
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PLEASE CORRECT MY GRAMMAR
hello Friend from other World.. I want to share my story. I was a employees. But I decide to resign and now I am a Bussiness woman, I sell some clothes and scarf. I almost don't have weekend. I work everyday. I sell stuff on Market and Store at my House. and Then I found that I must be improve my language skill. tourist has never come here, but I hope someday I found them here and I am want to be first person that can be their guide. I learn it from youtube and app from Playstore. and Finally I found so many friends from Italki. here I am.Hello friends from other countries! I want to share my story. I was an employee but decided to resign to start my own business. Now I am a businesswoman! I sell clothes and scarves. I work everyday and I'm so busy, I don't have any weekends free. I sell my items at a market and out of my home. I realize I must improve my language skills so when tourists come to my country, I can be their guide and show them around my country.
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Indonesia, and you ?
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Which country are you staying
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