Dreams Come True : one of my favourite artists Dreams Come True is a Japanese pop band. The music which they create is a hybrid of R&B, Funk, Pop, Rock and so on. Miwa Yoshida who is the main vocalist

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Dreams Come True : one of my favourite artists Dreams Come True is a Japanese pop band. The music which they create is a hybrid of R&B, Funk, Pop, Rock and so on. Miwa Yoshida who is the main vocalist and the frontwoman always sings powerfully and soulfully to send the songs to all the hearts of listeners. So I can feel sad songs are sadder and happy songs are happier. If you go to Dreams Come True concert, you would find her dancing and running on the stage to show herself to the audience in all directions as well as singing. And also you would notice everyone smiling and singing loud to her songs happily. I like the atmosphere of the live peformance very much. Therefore I'm a big fan of Dreams Come True.

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Dreams Come True : one of my favourite artists bands. (NOTE: "artists" mean individual persons).

Dreams Come True is a Japanese pop band. The music which they create is a hybrid of R&B, Funk, Pop, Rock and so on. Miwa Yoshida, who is the main vocalist and the frontwoman, always sings powerfully and soulfully to sending the songs to all the hearts of listeners. So I can feel sad songs are sadder and happy songs are happier.

If you go to a Dreams Come True concert, you would find her dancing and running in all directions on the stage to show herself to the audience, in all directions as well as to singing. And also you would notice everyone smiling and singing loudly and happily to her songs happily. I like the atmosphere of the live performance very much. Therefore I'm a big fan of Dreams Come True.

This is very good, and my corrections are a bit picky. For example, I put "in all directions" where I did so everyone knows it is connected to the singing and dancing. Similarly, "happily" is connected to "singing.

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