Perfume in Subway Stations
Recently, I read an article which interested me a lot, I would like to share this with you, that is why I wrote this entry.
The city of Lyon decided to install fragrance diffusers in its subway stations. The perfume, said the interviewee, will improve the comfort of the customers by masking them the unpleasant odors of the subway stations. Customers would find that the place is cleaner and they will feel safer than usual. That is why they selected the "Green Tea" perfume, in addition to the harmless molecule this perfume is made up of.
The first tests were conclusive and if the next steps of the rollout went on satisfying the customers, the city of Lyon would install fragrance diffusers inside buses
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Perfume in Subway Stations
Recently, I read an article which that* interested me a lot, I would like to share this with you, that which** is why I wrote this entry.The city of Lyon decided to install fragrance diffusers in its subway stations. The perfume, said the interviewee, will improve the comfort of the customers by masking them*** the unpleasant odors of the subway stations. Customers would find that the place is cleaner and they will feel safer than usual. That is why they selected the "Green Tea" perfume, in addition to the harmless molecules**** (that) this perfume is made up of.
The first tests were conclusive, and if the next steps of the rollout went on continue to satisfying the customers, the city of Lyon would install fragrance diffusers inside buses.*****
*That vs which: In this case, the clause is restricting so you need "that" (you read several articles and *this particular one* interested you).
**In this case, you want to share the article, so the "which (is why)" is needed. It's explanatory or added information (uses "which"), not restrictive (uses "that").
***Or "sparing them from the unpleasant odors".
****Technically, it could just be one type of molecule, but I doubt it. It's usually a mixture of several molecules.
*****This is still in the future.
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Interesting topic! If only they would do this in Boston... :) You did an excellent job; here are the minor edits I would make if I were writing it myself.
Perfume in Subway Stations
Recently, I read an article which that interested me a lot, and I wrote this entry to share it with you. I would like to share this with you, that is why I wrote this entry.The city of Lyon decided to install fragrance diffusers in it's subway stations. The perfume, said the interviewee, will improve the comfort of the customers by masking them the unpleasant odors of in the subway stations. Customers would find feel that the place is cleaner and they will feel safer than usual. That is why they selected the "Green Tea" perfume, in addition to the harmless molecule this perfume is made up of.
The first tests were conclusive, and if the next steps of the rollout went on satisfying the customers, the city of Lyon would install fragrance diffusers inside buses as well.
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