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Statement of Purpose By the time I went to Belfast to study as Erasmus, International Human Rights Law was an area that appealed to me thoroughly. This is the reason why I enrolled a pure Human Rights module, as my home university does not offer a course entirely about Human Rights. I needed to test my fondness for Human Right so as to be sure that it was not weak and therefore, not my true passion. The result was completely positive: I enjoyed the module a lot and it encouraged me to keep reading academic articles and human rights blogs in order to continue learning. Learning is a tough task because it does not have an end.

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Statement of Purpose

By the time I went to Belfast to study as an Erasmus scholar, International Human Rights Law was already an area that appealed to me thoroughly greatly. This is the reason why I enrolled in a pure Human Rights module, as my home university does not offer a course entirely about Human Rights. I needed to test my fondness for Human Rights so as to be sure that it was not weak and therefore, not my true passion. The result was completely positive; I enjoyed the module a lot and it encouraged me to keep reading academic articles and human rights blogs in order to continue learning. Learning is a tough task because it does not have an end.

Your English is excellent! The edits I made are very minor.

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Statement of Purpose

By the time I went to Belfast to study as Erasmus, International Human Rights Law was an area that appealed to me thoroughly. This is the reason why I enrolled  in a pure Human Rights module, as my home university does not offer a course entirely about Human Rights. I needed to test my fondness for Human Rights so as to be sure that it was not weak and therefore, not my true passion. The result was completely positive: I enjoyed the module a lot and it encouraged me to keep reading academic articles and human rights blogs in order to continue learning. Learning is a tough task because it does not have an end.


Muy bien....  tu ingles es excelente.

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