Number 2
One day I was at home, It was 6:30 am, I had to go to work at the hospital, so, I turned the dishwasher on and I left my house.
In that moment, it was the rush hour, so there was a lot of traffic. I arrived at 7:30 am, I opened the door of the hospital and I saw my first patient, he was a man, he was about 60 years, he was a disabled person, he couldn't walk so, he had to use a wheel chair, before atent him a friend of mine asked me "Would you like a coffee"? And I told him that I prefered just a bottle of water.
I started to talk with my patient, he told me that he had felt very bad and he had diarrhea and that his joints hurt, so I needed to extract blood with a syringe. I extracted blood of his artery to make an analysis.
After 2 hours I couldn't find a cure I was so frustated that I didn't want to talk, so I went for help, but when I left the room a nurse spilled her coffee on my shirt and I felt very angry but I just Ignored it and went for help, when I came back the mand told us that he felt better and he wanted to go home, I read his analysis and everything seems be fine so we let him go.
If is there any mistakes could you please correct me?
Thank you so much!
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Number 2
One day I was at home at 6:30 am, but I had to go to work at the hospital. I turned on the dishwasher, and I left my house.It was rush hour so there was a lot of traffic. I arrived at 7:30 am. I opened the door of the hospital, and I saw my first patient. He was a 60-year-old man who was a disabled person. He couldn't walk so he had to use a wheel chair. Before attending to him, a friend of mine asked me "Would you like a coffee?". I told him that I preferred just a bottle of water.
I started to talk with my patient, and he told me that he had felt very bad. He had diarrhea and his joints hurt, so I needed to extract blood with a syringe. I extracted blood from his artery to make an analysis.
After 2 hours I couldn't find a cure, and I was so frustrated that I didn't want to talk. I went to look for help, but when I left the room a nurse spilled her coffee on my shirt. I felt very angry, but I just Ignored it and left to find help. When we came back, the man told us that he felt better and he wanted to go home. We read his analysis and everything seemed to be fine, so we let him go.
I hope this helps.
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