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Just a small essay to practice my writing, it's not finished yet. This is not a good story. It's better you know that before get angry with me, so go do something outside and see what is beautiful in this world. Okay, let's start. I warned you. In a day, that you probably won't remember, a girl is born. She was so tiny and a crybaby. She didn't know what was happening around her on that moment, but she could feel the hungryon her stomach. Sadly her mother died when she came out, so no food for our crybaby. The little girl spend hourson this way and nobody listened to her, until this ladywho was passing by, just doing shopping to forget her loneliness, hear the cry of our baby girl. the lady was confused, "That can't be a baby" she thought, but she follow the sound anyway.

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Just a small essay to practice my writing, it's not finished yet.

This is a bad story. It's better you know that before get angry with me, so go do something outside and see what is beautiful in this world. Okay, let's start. I warned you. In a day that you probably won't remember a girl is born. She was so tiny and a crybaby.
She didn't know what was happening around her at that moment, but she could feel the hunger in her stomach. Sadly her mother died when she came out, so no food for our crybaby. The little girl spend hours this way and nobody listened to her, until this lady who was passing by, just doing shopping to forget her loneliness, heard the cry of our baby girl. The lady was confused, "That can't be a baby" she thought, but she followd the sound anyway.

Very well written!

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