ЭССЕ. Essay for exam The problem of professional sport has been worrying people for a long time. Discussing this question, people are usually divided into to groups: those, who believe that the prof.

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ЭССЕ. Essay for exam The problem of professional sport has been worrying people for a long time. Discussing this question, people are usually divided into to groups: those, who believe that the prof.sport is bad for us, and people, who deny this fact. As for my opinion, I agree with the first group of people. Sport influnces the education, companionship, including friends. Firstly, I can say, that education needs much more time, than some young people can have, and sport is hard load, which doesnt leave free time. Secondly, some people get injured, which is serious enough, that some sportsmen remain with it for life. It influnces the life in whole. Mens leave big sport. Moreover, professional sport isnt occupation for life. Frequently people had to look for other job, when time passed away, in which they could win, be victorious. It is very sad. Speaking about the opinion of other people, I disagree with them. They consider, that sport doesnt injure health at all, but rather helps. On the one hand, it is right, but on the other handeach athlete takes riskes of his own life, that can be very dangerous. In the concluding part, Id like to say, that professional sport is very risky, and not everyone will be able to, but sports are always needed, it improves immunity and improves health.

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ЭССЕ. Essay for exam

The problem of professional sports had been worrying people for a long time. Discussing the question, people are usually divided into to groups according to their opinion: those, who believe that the professional sports is bad for us, and people who denied this fact.
As for my opinion, I agree with the first group of people. Sports influences the education, companionship, and cammaraderie. Beforehand, I can say, education is a need , and sports is hard load, which doesn't leave free time. Fact is , some people get injured, which is serious enough, that some sportsmen remain with it for life. It influences the life in whole. Moreover, professional sport isn't an occupation for life. Frequently people had to look for other job, for this is the most constant to supply their basic needs and their family as well...
Speaking about the opinion of other people, I disagree with them. They consider, that sports can be a big help to health . On the other hand, it is right, ironically athlete takes risks of his own life, that can be very dangerous.
In the concluding part, Id like to say, that professional sport is a risk to ones physical outlook , but sports are always needed, it improves immunity and improves health.

ЭССЕ. Essay for exam

The problem of professional sport has been worrying people for a long time. Discussing this question, people are usually divided into groups: those who believe that the prof.sport is bad for us; and people,who deny this very (for emphasis) fact.
As for my opinion, I agree with the first group of people. Sport influences our education and companionship with our friends. Firstly, I can say that education needs much more time allocation relative to what the students have in schools. Sport is a tough activity, which usually doesn't leave free time. Secondly, some people get injured, which is serious enough to leave some sport men with injury for all their lives. It influences life in whole. Moreover, professional sport isn't an occupation for life. Frequently people had to look for other jobs when the time when they were winning and victorious had already passed away. It is very sad.
Speaking about the opinion of other people, I disagree with them. They consider that sport doesn't affect health at all, but rather helps it. On one hand, it is right, but on the other hand, each athlete risks his own life. It can be very dangerous.
In the concluding part, I would like to say, that professional sport is very risky, and not everyone will be able to do it. But sports are always needed because it improves our immunity and health.

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Speaking about Regarding the opinion of other people, I disagree with them. They consider, that sport doesn't injure health at all, but rather helps. On the one hand, it is right, but on the other handeach athlete takes riskes of with his own life, that can be very dangerous.
In conclusion the concluding part, Id like to say, that professional sport is very risky, and not everyone will be able to participate; however, but sports are always needed, --(use long dash here also) it improves immunity and improves health.

ЭССЕ. Essay for exam

The problem of professional sport has been worrying people for a long time. Discussing this question, people are usually divided into to groups: those, who believe that prof.sport is bad for us, and people, who deny this fact.
As for my opinion, I agree with the first group of people. Sport influnces education, companionship, and friendship. Firstly, I can say that education needs much more time than some young people can have, and sport is a hard load, which doesnt leave free time. Secondly, some people get injured, which is serious enough, that some sportsmen remain with it for life. It influnces the life in whole. Mens leave big sport. Moreover, professional sport isnt a occupation for life. Frequently, people had to look for other job, when time passed away, in which they could win, rp be victors. It would be very sad.
Speaking about the opinion of other people, I disagree with them. They consider, that sport doesnt injure health at all, but rather helps. On one hand, it is right, but on the other, handeach athlete takes riskes of his own life, which can be very dangerous.
In the concluding part, Id like to say that professional sport is very risky, and not everyone will be able to, but sports are always needed, it improves immunity and improves health.

ЭССЕ. Essay for exam

The problem of professional sport has been worrying people for a long time. Discussing this question, people are usually divided into to two groups: those, who believe that the professional prof. (you could abbreviate professional in an informal conversation, but better to write out in an essay) sport is bad for us, and people, those (you could have left 'people' as you had it, but I think it sounds better to use the same pronoun that you used in the first item) who deny this fact.
As for my opinion, I agree with the first group of people. -- (this is a continuation of the idea in the previous sentence, so I would use a long dash, which I think is also known as an em dash) Sport influences the education, companionship, including friends (not really sure what you mean by "friends" here. I think you are probably clarifying what you meant by companionship? if that's the case, then I think 'companionship' sufficiently conveys this idea by itself). Firstly, I can say, that education needs much more time, than some young people can have, and sport is very time-consuming hard load, which doesn't leave free time. Secondly, some people get injured, which is can be serious enough, that some sportsmen remain with it for life. It influences the life in whole. Mens leave (I think you meant 'love'?) big sport. Moreover, professional sport isn't an occupation for life. Frequently people had have (present tense, because this is an ongoing problem) to look for other another job. when time passed away Meanwhile, time passes, in which they could win, be victorious. It is very sad.

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