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The places to visit London is the capital of England, its political and bussiness centre. The heart of London and the oldest part of it is the City, with its banks and offices. Many people work in there but almost nobody lives. Another interesting place in London is the Tower of London. It was a palace, a fortress, a prison and the King's Zoo, and now it is a museum. There are a lot of interesting things in the rooms of the White Tower. For example, its square walls are white and very tall. It was William the Conqueror who built it in the eleventh century. There are also black ravens in the Tower. People keep them because they believe that London will be rich while ravens live there. One of the most interesting places in London is Saint Paul's Cathedral. A famous architect Sir Christopher Wren build it in the 17th century, after the Great Fire. It took him 35 years. It is a beautiful building with many columns and towers. In one of its towers there is one of the largest bells in the world. In the centre of London there is Trafalgar Square. In the middle of it stands a monument to Admiral Nelson.Next to the Trafalgar Square there is the National Gallery. It is one of the best picture galleries in the world. Every day a lot of tourist visit this wonderful place.

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London is the capital of England, and its political and business centre. The heart of London and the oldest part of it is the City, with its banks and offices. Many people work in there but almost nobody lives there. Another interesting place in London is the Tower of London. It was a palace, a fortress, a prison and the King's Zoo, and now it is a museum. There are a lot of interesting things in the rooms of the White Tower. For example, its square walls are white and very tall. It was William the Conqueror who built it in the eleventh century. There are also black ravens in the Tower. People keep them because they believe that London will be rich while if ravens live there.
One of the most interesting places in London is Saint Paul's Cathedral. A famous architect Sir Christopher Wren build it in the 17th century, after the Great Fire. It took him 35 years. It is a beautiful building with many columns and towers. In one of its towers there is one of the largest bells in the world.
In the centre of London there is Trafalgar Square. In the middle of it stands a monument to Admiral Nelson.  Next to the Trafalgar Square there is the National Gallery. It is one of the best picture galleries in the world. Every day a lot of tourists visit this wonderful place.
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i hardly know about London so this sentence make me interesting! i ve never been there so someday i wanna go!

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