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Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese
In recent years, it is more and more common that students in China are always neglecting the study for their Chinese studies.This phenomenon raised a procured nation-wide attention. What is (saying "what's" is less professional than "what is") the reason resulted in it for this behaviour and what is its the effect on these students' growing upbringing? People consider these questions seriously.
Most people maintain that it is needless to say do not believe that lacking of Chinese study has a very bad effect on negatively affects the students' development of knowledge. As i see to it, there are two factors that weigh heavily for that support this matter. For one thing, with the economic growing growth (in China), people give more attention to abroad foreign language; just like how English is becoming more and more popular with Chinese students. For this reason, students devote most of their time to study English and have no else enough have less time to learn others. For another thing reason, it is indeed true that people's ideas have changed a lot (in recent years). They always consider that Chinese is no not useful and that study on studying it is worthless.
From my perspective, Chinese is a great language and we must study hard on it study it diligently. The best solution to the issue is changing providing awareness for the the ideas of students. We can hold create some movements which that can help people to realize the importance of Chinese. Meanwhile, we can take some measures to inspire them to study Chinese, for example, we can hold some Chinese competitions and reward students who wins these games.
(I am preparing a CET6 now,so I want to improve my writings. Who can help me?I want to someone to give me some suggestion.
Thanks so much!O(∩_∩)O~)
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