Sister's graduation trip
Recently,I am busy preparing the final exam. But my sister started her graduation trip to Xian,which is the capital city of Qin dynasty , yesterday.
My sister is a student of Hunan University , In July , she's about to graduate.A few days ago,she had dealt with all graduation materials and decided to have a journey.
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Recently,I have been busy preparing the final exam. But yesterday my sister started her graduation trip to Xian,which had been the capital in Qin dynasty .
My sister is a student of Hunan University , In July , she's about to graduate. A few days ago,she had finished all graduation materials and decided to have a journey.
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西安人民欢迎！
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西安人民欢迎！
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