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I am an university student. I like traveling in the city. One day, I planned to go on an excursion, so I bought a mobile ticket from the Internet.I carried my bag and ID go to fuzhou on saturday.There have a lot of high school classmates,and I very miss them. This trip's passenger toke my more than I expected.when I arrived Fuzhou station.I started to take bus to look for my friends, I sit in the front of the bus and get a good view of the city. After some time,look around, I realized with a shock that passenger very crowded on the bus.In that case, I paid more attention to my bag.Because we don't know stranger good or bad, so we need to protect our money and ID.
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Take Bus
I am an university student. I like traveling in the city. One day, I planned to go on an excursion, so I bought a mobile ticket from the Internet. I carried my bag and ID to go to Fuzhou on Saturday. There are a lot of high school classmates, and I very much miss them. This trip's passenger toke my more than I expected. When I arrived Fuzhou station. I started to take another bus to look for my friends, I sit in the front of the bus and got a good view of the city. After some time, I looked around, and I realized with a shock that it is very crowded on the bus. In that case, I paid more attention to my bag. Because we don't know whether stranger is good or bad, so we need to protect our money and ID.0
Take Bus
I am a university student. I like traveling in the city. One day, I planned to go on an excursion, so I bought a mobile ticket from the Internet. I carried my bag and ID to go to fuzhou on Saturday. A lot of high school classmates are there, and I miss them very much. This trip's passenger toke my more than I expected. When I arrived at Fuzhou station. I took a bus to look for my friends, I sat in the front of the bus and got a good view of the city. After some time, I looked around, I realized with a shock that the bus was very crowded with passengers. In that case, I paid more attention to my bag. Because we don't know if strangers are good or bad, so we need to protect our money and ID.Sorry I don't understand the words in blue.
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so - we wouldn't use "so" and "because" in the same sentence, you could use either one, but not both.
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