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When it is cold My smartphone is almost broken. I bought it about two years ago. Recently, it won't work when the temperature is low. The screen remains white unless warm it enough. I want new one soon!

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My smartphone is (kinda/kind of/a little) broken. // (Or... "My smartphone has a problem")

I bought it about 2 years ago but recently, when it gets too cold, it won't work.

The screen stays white unless it's warm enough, I want a new phone soon!

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When it is cold

My smartphone is almost broken. I bought it about two years ago.
Recently, it won't work hasn't been working when the temperature is low.
The screen remains white unless warm it it is warm enough.
I want a new one soon!

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