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That cursed fish seller... I'm studying new words and phrasal verbs (in capital letters), so forgive me my repetitions. ------------ Some days ago I was LOOKING FOR something tasty to eat. So I went to the market and I moved close to the fish seller. I was impressed by him. He HAD THE LOOKS! He LOOKed LIKE George Clooney and he really HAD THE LOOK OF an actor. However, he wasn't as kind as handsome. Although I had never seen him, he LOOKED DOWN ON ME and I was very disappointed. When I was LOOKING AT his goods, he suggested me to buy a piece of swordfish. I was ON THE VERGE of getting angry but, despite of disagreeing, I accepted and I asked him to CUT the fish UP. The fish seller didn't LOOK ON me as before and, after paying, I return home more relaxed. I was very hungry and I LOOKED FORWARD TO eat that fresh piece of swordfish. But, while I was weighting it, I realized that there was something strange. I LOOKED the label OVERand it was impossibile to understand what there was written. Anyway, I cooked the piece of swordfish and it smelt very disgusting. In addition, it LOOKED AS IF the fish floated on SEWAGE. How was it possible! I bought the fish that morning. I WAS BEING crazy... But I was very hungry and so... I ate it all! After few minutes, I screamed my head off ALARMINGLY. I had a dreadful stomach ache and I wanted to slap REMOTELY that fish seller. When the things LOOKED UP, I LOOKED to my revenge. I returned to the market to QUESTION the fish smoothly. I made the fish seller 's shop a FILTHY place TEEMING WITH hungry seagulls. Don't ask me how I did it, but I'm UNFAZED when someone tells me about the mess in market.

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That cursed fish seller...

I'm studying new words and phrasal verbs (in capital letters), so forgive me my repetitions.
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Some days ago I was LOOKING FOR something tasty to eat. So I went to the market and I moved close  as I approached  the fish seller. I was impressed by him. He HAD THE LOOKS! He LOOKed LIKE George Clooney and he really HAD THE LOOK OF an actor.

However, he wasn't as kind as he was handsome. Although I had never seen him, he SEEMED TO LOOK DOWN ON ME(a suggestion  because it is your impression of how he regarded you ) LOOKED DOWN ON ME and I was very disappointed.

When I was LOOKING AT his goods, he suggested that I  me to buy a piece of swordfish. I was ON THE VERGE of getting angry but, despite  instead of of disagreeing, I accepted and I asked him to CUT the fish UP. The fish seller didn't LOOK DOWN ON   me (I am guessing that you mean that he did not look at you in a  disapproving way  so 'LOOK DOWN ON' is OK here ) as before and, after paying, I return home more relaxed.

I was very hungry and I LOOKED FORWARD TO eating that fresh piece of swordfish. But, while I was weightng it, I realized that there was something strange about it. I LOOKED the label OVER and it was impossibile to understand what there was written on it. Anyway, I cooked the piece of swordfish and it smelt very disgusting. In addition, it LOOKED AS IF the fish floated on   had been contaminated by SEWAGE.  
How was it possible! I bought the fish that morning. I WAS BEING crazy...Was I GOING crazy?

But I was very hungry and so... I ate it all!
After few minutes, I screamed my head off ALARMINGLY. I had a dreadful stomach ache and I wanted to slap REMOTELY   to punish /get even with  that fish seller.

When the things LOOKED UP, I LOOKED to my revenge.
I returned to the market to QUESTION the fish smoothly. (Not sure what is intended here)
I made (I saw that?)  the fish seller 's shop was a FILTHY place TEEMING WITH hungry seagulls.

Don't ask me how I did it, but I'm UNFAZED when someone tells me about the mess in market.

Congratulations on your work Serena. It is a difficult challenge.

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That cursed fish seller...

I'm studying new words and phrasal verbs (in capital letters), so forgive me my repetitions.
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Some days ago I was LOOKING FOR something tasty to eat. So I went to the market and I moved close to the fish seller. I was impressed by him. He HAD THE LOOKS! He LOOKed LIKE George Clooney and he really HAD THE LOOK OF an actor.

However, he wasn't as kind as he was handsome. Although I had never seen him, he LOOKED DOWN at ME and I was very disappointed.

When I was LOOKING AT his goods, he suggested I buy a piece of swordfish. I was ON THE VERGE of getting angry but, instead of disagreeing, I accepted and I asked him to CUT the fish UP. The fish seller didn't LOOK at(or look me down) me as before and, after paying, I returned home more relaxed.

I was very hungry and I LOOKED FORWARD TO eating that fresh piece of swordfish. But, while I was weighing it, I realized that there was something strange. I LOOKED the label OVER and it was impossible to understand what was written there. Anyway, I cooked the piece of swordfish and it smelled very disgusting. In addition, it LOOKED AS IF the fish floated(had been in?) on SEWAGE.
How was that possible! I bought the fish that morning. I WAS BEING crazy...

But I was very hungry and so... I ate it all!
After few minutes, I screamed my head off ALARMINGLY. I had a dreadful stomach ache and I wanted to slap that fish seller.

When  things LOOKED UP, I began LOOKing forward to my revenge.
I returned to the market to QUESTION the fish seller.
I made the fish seller 's shop a FILTHY place TEEMING WITH hungry seagulls.

Don't ask me how I did it, but I'm UNFAZED when someone tells me about the mess in market.

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