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Siam Park Hi Christian! I received your photos this afternoon when I got home from College.Thank you so much mate, it was awesome to share such a wonderful holiday with you! I'll buy an album at the shopping centre tomorrow because I'd love to keep these amazing memories forever. It just happens that I am going to go to Siam Park within a few days, so would you like to go to the best water park of the island next Sunday? I am sure we are going to have a wonderful time, but remember to bring sunscreen and money because it's not allowed to bring food,it's a really strict rule everyone must respect. You should know that there are always large queues since mornings so we will have to wake up early that day, right? Once into the water Park we could swim on the artificial beach or ride in the other fascinating amusements. I look forward your reply pal! Noelia.

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Hi Christian!
I received your photos this afternoon when I got home from College.Thank you so much mate, it was awesome to share such a wonderful holiday with you! I'll buy an album at the shopping centre tomorrow because I'd love to keep these amazing memories forever.
It just happens that I am going to go to Siam Park within a few days, so would you like to go to the best water park of the island next Sunday? I am sure we are going to have a wonderful time, but remember to bring sunscreen and money because it's not allowed to bring food,it's a really strict rule everyone must respect.
You should know that there are always large queues since mornings so we will have to wake up early that day, right?
Once into the water Park we could swim on the artificial beach or ride in the other fascinating amusements.
I look forward your reply pal!
Noelia.

Good writing.  Only change I would suggest is "there are always long queues in the mornings" instead of "there are always long queues since mornings".  In the US, we use the word "line" instead of "queue". 

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Siam Park

Hi Christian!
I received your photos this afternoon when I got (went)home from College.Thank you so much mate, it was awesome to share such a wonderful holiday with you! I'll buy an album at the shopping centre tomorrow because I'd love to keep these amazing memories forever.
It just happens that I am going to go to Siam Park within a few days, so would you like to go to the best water park of the island next Sunday? I am sure we are going to have a wonderful time, but remember to bring sunscreen and money because it's not allowed to bring food,it's a really strict rule everyone must respect.
You should know that there are always large queues since mornings so we will have to wake up early that day, right?
Once into the water Park we could swim on the artificial beach or ride in the other fascinating amusements.
I look forward your reply pal!
Noelia.

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